Jaybird

@liberty

Well, that was fast!!! I am so glad that you liked it!!! Woah! Favorites list!??! That’s saying something when I know the kind of things you read!!

Well thanks so much for skimming it! I’ll take a look at the comments. May email you a few things after I do! Yes, I have a playlist. I’ll email that too.

@elishavet-pidyon  @koshka

Honestly! You two need this published!

The funniest thing is, you are writing a LotR fanfic but in a way that no one would actually say, “Oh, it’s fanfic!” It’s a complete twist of the rules! Quite brilliant really.

@ellette-giselle

I just finished it…I didn’t comment much, but still, there are some. OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! 314 was my favorite character from the first moment he appeared…but I won’t know 100% for sure until I have the actual book and take the time to fully, slowly read it.

This book reminds me so much of another story a young writer wants…[Read more]

@liberty

also, if you would let me know on KP how far you get each day that would be great so I can look over the comments. Word doesn’t tell me what comments are new and it will save me having to weed through them all. XD

@liberty

Yay! Oooo! So glad you like the boards!

@ellette-giselle

AHHHH!!! Oh my gosh!!! I love those boards! Amber….that’s SO cool! By the way, I’ve started commenting a bit in Sector 5. I know I’m late, so I’m just skimming it in preporation for Book 2.

@elishavet-pidyon

Interesting… He looks like he’s facing several dilemmas. I like him. Hmm.

😄 You were actually the only person to point that out! Yes…dilemmas is the perfect word.

Was he the prince in the short story?

Yup. 100% royalty.

Closer to the typical knight type of warrior. Honor is a big thing to him.

*big nod* Oh yes. 🎶 Truth, hon…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Contemplative personality, probably optimistic in a quieter way.

Ooo, I love how you worded that! “Optimistic in a quieter way”. I’ve found that getting feedback on character boards gives me more varied vocabulary for describing them.

Probably has some good advice up his sleeve and maybe a little mischief(which others don’t e…

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@keilah-h

-Very nice green eyes (lol I just think green eyes are so cool)

😄 I didn’t even notice they were a green color…I was going for a pale blue/grayish…but I think “green” actually fits him well.

-Does Psalm 23 imply that he himself is a shepherd or comes from a family who worked with sheep, or is that just his favorite psalm?

It portrays…[Read more]

I might RP my characters soon, idk. I think they have pretty bad attendance at this point, lol XD

@linus-smallprint

Awesome, thanks. btw, KP is acting up for me so I can’t see anything I’m typing. (Thought I’d let you know in case my posts are complete gibberish. lol)

@linus-smallprint

Hey, if you have the time to do so, I’d really like it if you would let me know how many chapters you cover each day when you read S%TH. It doesn’t actually tell me if you’ve commented, but if you tell me what chapter’s you’ve read, I’ll know where to look for comments from you. Thanks!

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

And here’s Zahn!

Honestly, Slack would be a good option, I’ve used it for other writing groups and it works super well. The only problem is that the free version keeps messages for only 90 days, which could become an issue…

Ooh interesting first question! Let’s see here… For my current WIP…

Audrey’s primary response is definitely freeze. She just needs to stop, take in the situation, and figure out what to do, although her fears and anxieties often drown out the voice of logic to begin with. And then her secondary response is flight. If she can’t control or figure…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I can help!! Characters are my favoriteeeee

*emerges from the dust and shadows*

Has the dance even happened yet?

Actually, I think there was a point in the drafting or planning stage that lowkey forgot Brandon existed 💀🤦🏻‍♀️🤣

@theducktator

Awww, thank you so much girl!!! 💖 I appreciate you taking the time to read through it all! <33

Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?

@savannah_grace2009

No that’s really helpful! Tysm!!

@grcr

Thanks!!! Let me know when you’re ready.