Elishavet Elroi

@hybridlore

hopefully.

working on it.

HAPPY 4TH OF JULY!!!

I hope y’all have a great day!!! It’s been such a blessing to get to know several of y’all this past year!! May God bless you today!

Here are some great quotes to remember amid all the fireworks and fun!

“The cost of freedom is always high but Americans have always paid it.”
~John F Kennedy

“The real…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aw good!! It was believable then?

You may have to email me for that other question. Not exactly sure what you’re asking.

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 24

Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.

How can anything go b…[Read more]

@theshadow

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.

Thank you so much!!

A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…

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NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(47)

Only 1. I ran out of time to get the other done and I haven’t found a solid chunk of time to sit down. Barely got this one done.

@koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power

New chapters should be out today, but I noticed no one but Hybridlore has read the ones I posted yesterday, (45-46)

@keilah-h

I think you’re on Chapter 40.

@keilah-h

Thanks! I appreciate that.

btw, have you seen the new chapters?

@keilah-h

Sure thing!!!

@keilah-h

Thanks!!!!

hahahahaha

@highscribeofaetherium

Yay! That was a perfect one for number 4,000!

TO EVERYONE

A few tags

@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore  @theducktator @whalekeeper  @rae

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NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*sits back and smiles*

@rae

awesome!

Tag me when you do!

@rae

I know!! That quote is just AMAZING!!! I would love to see more of him!

Yes, it was a little bit flat in places, and maybe it could use some reworking, but honestly I think 1st person would spoil it. I liked all the scenes you had and the way you laid it out, even if it could use a teeny bit of work. That’s what I’m trying to say.…[Read more]

@rae

Sorry! I just saw this.

Hmmm…. I don’t like first person naritives… so that already makes me biased, but I honestly really liked that chapter the way it is. Like, a LOT. I don’t want you to touch it. If it’s the chapter I’m thinking of (the end one) it was one of my very favorites.

You can try the first person, but I say leave…[Read more]

@rae

since most publishing companies fail within five years

Ouch.

Hahahahaha! Totally joking.

Well that’s really great. I’ve gone through the nightmare, and while horrible, at least it helped me know which information I wanted/needed readily available to be able to have WHP set up in a way that other authors would get what they…[Read more]

@keilah-h

So true though! XD

@hybridlore

Ha. Ha.

Very funny.