Jaybird

@thearcaneaxiom

Ok, yeah that makes sense. Thanks for clarifying! I would love to hear more, because you make it sound man made to a extent, but it’s also clearly a magical or beyond technological structure, so I want to understand the lore you got going now.

That’s a really good question… because I’m still figuring some things out. XD

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@otherworldlyhistorian

Great idea!!

I really need to worldbuild for Aletheia more. 🤦🏻‍♀️ This will help me finally get to the religions. I have a feeling they’ll be pretty close to real-world religions, since their world is very similar to ours, but I’m not sure yet. 🤔

@freedomwriter76

Have you RPed next for Will/the brothers, or did I miss it?

(I think my last RP is on pg. 348)

@princesachronicle22

Anwyn cringed, knowing that it was the sound of the strange foot coverings these savages chose to wear.

*gasp* Oh my word, is she talking about shoes?? That’s awesome!! XD I felt confused like she was at our human world, but in a good way. I could really see the world through her eyes, so great job!! 😄

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@acancello

I really like it!! I get a feel for the characters even more than the other way you had it. (For me, getting a feel for the characters is really important. 🙂 ) I loved the description!! 😄 Great job!!

@mineralizedwritings

I think the first one is pretty good, but I think they all need to be more parallel. (This is something I’ve struggled with in naming the books in my trilogy) It always depends on the series in how your naming them. For example, the titles from WFS are exactly parallel. On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness, North! Or Be Ea…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww I love the sunrise part! And sweet Ami…and Ev!!

Yes, I love those two!! 🥰

These two paragraphs were my favorites. You did them so amazingly well! I love how she’s realizing that God created it, and thanking him for it with her joy. ❤❤❤

Thank you so much!!! 😊❤️

I love how Ami views nature like that. (I have another cha…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I love that!!! I could really see the sunrise in my head, and it was sooo good!!! AMAZING job, girl!!! 💖💖💖💖

Thank you so much!!! 😄😊🥰❤️

That means a lot!! ❤️

@thearcaneaxiom

How well simulated is the Orb’s sunrise? Would it look cartoonishly fake? Like a yellow spot going up and down, or does the Orb make it look far more like t…

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@mineralizedwritings

I love those 😍😍!! Yes, I think it can work. It sounds good! 🙂

@esther-c

Aww I love the sunrise part! And sweet Ami…and Ev!!

Slowly, the sky grew lighter, and the edge of the sun began to peek over the horizon. The dew glistened in its light. It illuminated the sky with hues of rose, peach, and daffodil. The sunlight…

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@princesachronicle22

Wow!!!! That’s SOOO good girl!! I love the detail and how clear it is. 😍😍😍😍

I have that problem too, like smoothly transitioning scenes, especially for memories and flashbacks.

Hmm…well, you could connect the next scene with maybe Anwyn like wincing at the memory, or some kind of reaction.

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@godlyfantasy12

Ah, I would, but my family is about to go out to eat! I’ll try to get one in tonight, if not, then tomorrow. 🙂 Sorry!

@godlyfantasy12

Aww Aaron!! He’s so precious and sweet <3<3

And…that picture…Wow. Just WOW. XD

@freedomwriter76

Happy Birthday!!!

I hope your birthday is AMAZING!!!! 🥳🎉🎈🎊💖

Thank you so much 😊🥰💖!!!!! It has been pretty amazing so far 🥰

Aww Liam!! Riker!! And Cameron!!

XDXD Damien!! He’s so cute.

@godlyfantasy12

im also wondering if Vance is still going to get away with Bren because that group is getting large… but I also am enjoying t…

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@lightoverdarkness6

Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️

Lol

Of course!!! <3

@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @gwyndalf-the-wise @whalekeeper @loopylin @anyone-else-who-cares-to-critique

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What an epic Hot Wheels battle I just had!!! Who would have imagined that the black and red Lotus Concept would have survived to the very end! Beating the green and blue Country Club Muscle™ by literally trapping it against my floor mat, and box of pennies/rocks, then smashing the poor CCM to oblivion!!! 🏎️

Oops, I mean the Shal’le 🤦 Sorry! XD

@esther-c

Girl…

That scene…

Was…

AMAZING!!!! 🤩

I really enjoyed reading it and it kept me on the edge of my seat! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!! 😃✨

Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️

@princesachronicle22

AHHH!!!! Dylan, Asher!!! That was so good girl!!!

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@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Ah sorry girl! I probably won’t be on much the next day or two, tomorrow is my birthday and I’m going to be gone for a lot of the day. And yes, I think it’s your turn to split up the groups! 🙂

Also, is it my turn to RP as Vance?