Jaybird

@mineralizedwritings

This paragraph had a lot of they do this than that. I would try to replace some of it with descriptions of them doing this, like idk maybe Ev’s shoes slide in the gravel as he makes his way down? Maybe the cave was dark, and they come out into the moonlight? I wasn’t able to envision the kinda “vibe” of the setting…

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@kyronthearcanin

Yw!! 😀

@felicity

*facepalm* WHOOOOPS. Sorry girls!!!!

XD That’s okay girl!! Everyone does it 😅

Aw thanks!!!!!! I’m so glad you like it! I might be able to share some of it on here soon.

You’re sooo welcome!!! Yes, it sounds SO AWESOME!!! Ooh okay! 😀

Well, more like a couple days. 😄 And I still have a ton to figure out. It’s been a while since I was rea…

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@freedomwriter76

Thanks, girl, you’re so sweet!!! ❤️❤️❤️

You’re so welcome!! Aww, thank you!! You are too! ❤️❤️❤️

You’re soooooo welcome!!!! 💗🥰💖

💖💖💖

Well…anything you wanna talk about? 🙂

I’m not doing much right now. XD

Sure! I’m about to eat dinner, but I can talk for a few minutes! If I suddenly disappear, I went to eat dinner, cuz my dad lik…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ooh!! Awesome! 😀

Poor Lukas!! The sweet baby 😭❤😭❤

So, maybe for the grizzly bear, it would probably wake up before the soldiers got there, because it would probably smell Ev. But it really depends on the time of year. It could’ve been hibernating!

(I just learned that bears actually don’t hibernate, they really only enter a l…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

You are sooooo welcome!!!! 💗💗💗💗💗

❤️❤️❤️

Yeah, I’m good. 😅😂 It still hurts, but some ice and heat certainly helped it feel better 😉 But I’m okay! ❤️ No need to worry but thank you for your concern! 🥰

Okay, good 😊 Yeah!! I’m glad you’re feeling better! Of course! ❤️🥰

Yeah…it happens. 😅 It’s not fun, but it’s a part of the process t…

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@freedomwriter76

Awww, that sounds like so much fun, albeit busy/tiring! ❤️😅😂😁💖 I’m glad you’re doing so well!!!

Yes it was!! 😅😁💖 Thank you!! 💖💖

I’m doing pretty well, thanks for asking, girl!!! 💖💖💖

You’re so welcome!! ❤️❤️❤️

I pulled a muscle helping my mom and dad shovel gravel today though… (like, felt it when I pulled it…😬) But otherwise…

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@freedomwriter76

TONY!!!! AHH THE BABY!!! AND SAM!!!! AHHHHH 😭😭😭😭😭

AND XDXD PETER!!! AHAHAH He’s sooo adorable with those s’mores!!!

@freedomwriter76

Awwwwwwwww, so sweet!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Yep, we’ve all got those scenes XD😍😁

Yesss!! ❤️❤️❤️ Haha, XD, yes we do 😁😅

How are you doing today, girl? I’ve been thinking about you. ❤️💗

Aww, girl, that means so much!! I’ve been thinking about you too!! 💗 I’m doing great!! These past few days have been really good, though busy. We hel…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Aw, girl, it’s okay! Thank you for understanding 😊

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @anyone-else

Could some of y’all read this chapter to see if it’s realistic and paced well. I know it’s only the second draft, but I’d like to get some feedback specifically on this chapter.

Ev couldn’…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

I’ve been thinking about writing an article as well. I don’t know what topic you could do, but I’ve been told that it’s a good idea to do something that you’re passionate about and that you know well.

I asked @kathleenramm about writing an article a little while ago. She should be able to give you some pointers. I know that [Read more]

@awsumfaith

LOL! I love those!! 🤣

@godlyfantasy12

Cool!

Yw!!! ❤️

Welcome back, @seekjustice!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amateur writer!!

So cool that you’re a dog trainer! I love dogs!! 🥰

Ahhh!! You have Aussies!! That’s one of my favorite dog breeds! (The other is Siberian huskies. I have one so… I’m biased. 😁)

Also really awesome that you…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

AWW Thank you girl!! Sorry it took so long 😆😅

Yw!!! ❤️

You’re good! 😊

So I just search like ‘girl with blonde hair and blue eyes’ or something, sometimes I’ll be more specific, sometimes I just leave it like that. And then, scroll and scroll until you find a picture that you like. Then sometimes, I’ll go on Pinterest and look…

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@godlyfantasy12

Wowzers! That looks epic!! 😆

I’m guessing this book is centered mostly around Jocelyn and Nyx?

@freedomwriter76

It looks so amazing!!! 😄 I love it!

@freedomwriter76

Yw!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️

😊

They are my underground Anti-Nazi resistance group!!! They’re local, mostly only in the area/town Riker is in/works in, and the leader is Ezekiel Gessner, a pastor of a local church. 😉

That sounds so cool!!

Here’s the main members of the Violet Iris’, all on a character board!!! 😏: (some come at later point…

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@thearcaneaxiom

Love it!!!! Such good quotes to represent him!!!

Aww THANK YOU!!!! ❤❤❤ Yeah, I love the quotes too!! They fit him soo well!

@esther-c

AHHH!!!

I LOVE IT!!!! 🤩 😆 Great job!! 😄

AWW Thank you girl!! Sorry it took so long 😆😅

@esther @keilah-h

So I just search like ‘girl with blonde hair and blue eyes’ or something, sometimes I’ll be…[Read more]

Here is a piece that I did for college a while back. I decided to dig it back up and work on it some. So, BEHOLD!!!