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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 11 hours ago
Asher found a girl! 🥰
I know!! I’m so happy!
Eric is kinda wicked, and Noah and Darrien enjoy it way to much. lolololol
Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁
Yeah, I know.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.
I say keep it
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 12 hours ago
How long should I give you before deciding that you must have forgotten to post your RP?
I don’t want to nag, but if you think you posted and are waiting on me, and I’m waiting on you, no one will ever post. Ya know?
lolol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”
“Oh…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
Vendailia is beyond.It’s not a bad idea to run the boarder, but it’s a bad idea to do it emotionally unstable and with part of a death wish, if you know what i mean.
Several soldiers already escaped by doing this.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 14 hours ago
Wow. That is an amazing character background! I don’t know him (Hans), but I’m assuming he hates Jews? Because what you just wrote is an powerful reason why he does.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 days, 20 hours ago
Aww, it’s Leon. I’m so glad my favorite has finally re-stolen your heart. Seriously. If you can concede to that much, I think I can like Riker as much as Leon.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 days, 5 hours ago
lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 days, 6 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 6 hours ago
He’s older then them.
Believe me.That’s always the worst.
I’m glad mine are younger.
Then again, I always wanted an older brother.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 6 hours ago
AND YOU ASK WHY I THROW SNOW AT YOU!!!??
This was AWESOME!!!!
I love this!!! I love it so much!! Ahhhhh!!! SO GOOOODDDDD!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 6 hours ago
On a side note, I regret to share the recent passing of one Black Mongoose.
Oh that is great! That is so great!
These are the reasons I keep my laptop locked any time I get up.
I have two brothers.
RIP @power
Actually, don’t rest in peace. You don’t deserve to rest in peace after such dastardly…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
It’s good. I like it.
I feel like Alan should have been a bit more remorseful in the end. It felt more like he tried to snitch a cookie and got caught more then he was using black magic. idk. I would have liked a repentance prayer, maybe a few tears, idk. It just didn’t feel real to me. *shrug* that might just be…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 7 hours ago
Um, not at all their characters, but that’s funny itr makes you think of them.
Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)
I wonder if that’s really going to be a problem when you are reading the book straight through, because William is introduced literally only two scenes…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 8 hours ago
No. XD (Although that would be pretty funny if we didn’t know until now, LOL). I had just recently learned that y’all were related and guessing from the gibberish and the “PWR” at the end of the post, I figured it was Power. 😉😂
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 8 hours ago
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 days, 9 hours ago
@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle
Thank y’all so much!💜
@ellette @elishavet @koshka @keilah-h @rae @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol
Again, extra words from the song “Here Again” by Elevation Worship.
Leon Aesthetic for the 3rd book! 🥹
Y’all know I love Riker…but y’all, when I say Leon has also stolen my heart (and broken it,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 9 hours ago
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Esther replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 3 days, 9 hours ago
Yeah, ok. Six MCs really isn’t terrible. I always find them interesting when they’re done well. (Not that I’ve specifically read any that didn’t do it well, buuut…. XD)
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 days, 9 hours ago
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