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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Idk…all I know is this hurts me to read lol XD
Ahh, don’t worry!! Ev is kinda oblivious rn. In this AU, he seems to be denying his feelings for Ami much more than in his actual story. But Ev will notice real soon and talk to Falon and make sure everything’s okay. 😊
Lukas
“It’s not wrong to be emotional… It’s okay actually,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ok awesome. 😁
Yeahhh, sorry abt that. 😂
I have no idea where the rest of your charries are, but I dragged Clint along with Ami to the dance practice where most of everyone else’s charries are. They aren’t dancing together rn tho because they switched partners and now Ami’s dancing with Ev. (Last I knew at least, I haven…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Faceclaims! in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
These are all so perfectttt
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Hey! Are you still RPing as your charries in this RP? Because I know Ami was going to the dance with Clint and I didn’t know if you wanted to RP them or not. If you’re not in this RP much anymore, then that’s totally fine. 😊 I just wanted to know so that I could move around my charries accordingly. 🙃
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
We do have another one, I believe, with Adrian, Everton, Erich, and Esther. (My charries and Freedom’s) Speaking of, Freedom, was I supposed to go next in that group? 😅
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Esther replied to the topic How To Write Christian Fantasy-Putting God In The Mix in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 7 months ago
Sooo… I’m actually having a bit of the same problem… so I’ll just stick around and see what everyone else says… *subscribes*
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Esther replied to the topic Character Faceclaims! in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
*if there are other ones…*
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Esther replied to the topic Character Faceclaims! in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m liking this alreadyyy *waits patiently for the other ones* 👀
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Awww 😭 It’s so sad but adorable at the same time 🥹
I LOVE those aesthetics!!!! They’re soooo goood❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much!!
And joining a new church is a big change!! I’ll pray for you and your family.
Yeah definitely, but it’s been a good one for us since this is exactly where God wants us at the moment.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks, they really are 😊
Thank you!!
Yeah, that’s fair. I use more description later on. I imagine my characters pretty vividly in my head, but I don’t always write it out. Typically I sprinkle in bits of description every now and then. Like, I think in the next chapter or so, I mention Ami has blonde hair. For the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ok, let’s do it! Is Pax just chillin’ in the school rn?
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, it is really cool! Not everyone likes to use it, but I find it really helpful in the beginning stages of developing a character.
Lukas
“W-well, I guess… I guess we’ll all just have to make the best out of the time we do have together.” He smiled softly. “And you could always visit Aletheia. It’s not in its best con…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
AHHHH THOSE BOARDS 😭😭😭😭💔💔❤❤
And that scene oh my gosh 🥺🥺🥺💔💔💔
“Uncle” Hans and Leo…just just 😭😭😭😭😭😭
@Mineralizedwritings @Whalekeeper
Sometimes I think about all the groups I’ve been a part of, left and moved on… (Ok but do we ever really move on? I still think about the elementary school friends.) and wonder how long I’ll…
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Light replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
OHH MY GOODNESS GIRRRRRLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!
I’VE MISSED YOU SOOOOOOO MUCHHHH 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
*TACKLE HUG* I’M SOOOOO GLAD THAT YOU’RE BACKKKKK ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
How are you?!? How’s my precious Pax 🥹 And NOVEMBERRRRR AKKKKK…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!! Me too 😊😁
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
🤣 I love that!!!
Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)
Lukas
He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!!
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Esther posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I’ve been reading through your WIP lately. I think I’m gonna try to read through the whole thing then come back with critiques. So it might be awhile before you get any feedback. Idk. I’ll try to read fast tho and get to the parts you were concerned about. (:
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Alrighty!! The promised first two chapters! Any feedback is welcome 🙂
Chapter 1
“Wait a coup?”“Shh, keep your voice down.”
“Hold on, start over.” Everton Barlowe stared down his older brother.
Asher sighed. “Did you not listen the first time?”
“I was stuck on the word ‘coup.’”
Another sigh. “Okay.” Asher tossed dark strands of hair off hi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry if it’s a bit blurry
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Oh okay! Thanks! (:
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