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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Why was I expecting this to be something positive?
You should know me better than that.
It kind of made the event feel like a slap. (Ouch. I’m feeling Josephs pain.)
Perfect! That’s exactly what I wanted.
It also feels more tragic because of how casually Eric and Asher headed out. It was just a normal day.
Ah yes. Poor b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Drat.
KP isn’t letting me know that y’all responded!
Grrr.
Hmm, it looks like I really stirred it up around here. lol.
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Power replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Oops! I fathom ya’ll be the wrong people folk!
🏃♂️💨
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
Sorry it’s so short.
Joseph woke. For a long moment he lay, trying to figure out what was happening and where he was. He had been so exhausted he didn’t even remember lying down. There was an odd sound, a sound he knew he had heard many times be…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m sorry, what?
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
That’s okay!!! You can make a animal character, (if you need help for that, I’d love to help!) or just turn one of your characters into an animal!
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Esther replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@liberty I would if I could buuuut… I don’t really have any animal characters 🤪 Sorry!
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Power replied to the topic Question about religion in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
On a side not, I think people tend to give satan too much credit. He seems to be view as the opposite of God, satan the ultimate evil, God the ultimate good. . . but this view is very flawed. I think a more accurate comparison would be a flea opposed against of the universe (the observable universe is about 500,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 miles…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I haven’t read the story thingamagiggley (I postulate n reckon that’s what this here forum thingy is for), but I hath a very important question to query.
Hath thou fed thy pet orangutangally? Nay? Welp, mayhap ye shouldest go n do it before he roars in rage and remorse, then tears up the typewriter writing woefully woefilled words.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
You’re so secretive! What are you hiding? 🤨
Wouldn’t you like to know.
Sadly, I have to jump off now, so I won’t be able to post the next section! I have some stuff I need to get done today.
Maybe I can get it to you this afternoon. Otherwise, you’ll just have to try to get to sleep tonight. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Maybe.
What do you THINK is going to happen?
If you give me an answer I might give you more!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
WARNING:
There has been a change in the rapid time jump. It is now a bigger time jump, and Joseph is 19. Sorry about the whiplash any of y’all are experiencing after that. lol.
NEXT SECTION!!
“Joseph, do you think the gates will ever open?”
Asher…
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freedom posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
@rae @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @koshka @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @whalekeeper @grcr @theducktator @hybridlore @anyone-else-idk
For anyone that’s tagged me in things, I’ll try to respond to some of y’all’s various replies/questions/things here on KP sometime hopefully soon. Life has been busy (I’ve finished what I hope to be the ✨final✨…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I finished the magazine!!!
Okay, now to get to work.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I’ll try to send something in as soon as I finish formatting my magazine and get it sent out. I’m almost done!!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.
The funniest thing is, my most reluctant actor is actually perusing film now that he’s an adult!
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Oh, I’m so sorry! I’ll be praying that you feel better soon! Happy early Thanksgiving, and congrats on your maybe final edit!! 💕💕
@hybridlore Thank you so much for the prayers and congratulations💜
Good for you!!! I can’t wait for it to be out!
Oh no! I had that a few months ago! It lasted FOREVER! I’ll be praying. It’s miserable.
Oh that sounds super fun! If the short film ever goes online send me a link. I’d love to see it.
@ellette-giselle Thank you for the prayers💜 And I’m glad you’re excited!! ✨
I’ll keep that in mind😉✨💜
Ooof. You have my prayers. Pneumonia isn’t fun. Try to get a lot of rest. *Offers a cup of tea and a pillow*
Awesome news about the 2nd book!
Hey, it’s good to see you! ❤️🥲 I’ve missed seeing the Queen of Emojis and HistFic. 👑📖
Ugh. Walking Pneumonia hit my sisters a month ago. It’s frustrating when the cough won’t go away or even do anything other than bruise your throat. I’ll be praying for you. *Adds honey to the tea* Honestly, we all need to rest sometimes. It’s okay to take your…[Read more]
@freed_and_redeemed I’ll be praying!
Aw man, that does NOT sound fun. 😣 I’ll be praying for your quick recovery!! 🫶🏻
Ohh no, I’ll be praying for you, too.
And aay!! That’s exciting about your book!
Happy early Thanksgiving! 😊
I’m so sorry that sounds so rough!! I’ll def be praying girl 🫶🏻 We love ya!
And congrats on the final stage of the editing process!!!! I’m sooo excited for you!!! ❤️