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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, I see what you mean. Eric was just teasing when he was being formal.
I’m envisioning a much larger cut. As I said, a “gash”And actually, depending on where the cut is, you can bleed out.Maybe not from something like that, though. That might be overdoing it. This is my first draft of this section. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!
Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh! That’s a relief! I wasn’t sure how to make my characters interact with a 2D dog!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Do you wait to figure out the psychology of the character during the writing, or do you graph that too?
Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..
(Sorry, I don’t really do technical names. I just do whatever I’m going to do. lol. If that makes sense.)
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I also forgot to mention that he’s a cardboard cutout right now: dry, without a personality, but with some sort of 2D substance I’ve inserted into him which goes along the lines of “you were a bad person, now you’re trying to change, good luck.”
Wait, he’s 2D?? Or is that figuratively? Would you mind explaining?
But, yes! That will…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
There wasn’t really a story, Fantasy RP was set up to have a loose story. Animal RP is kinda of like the other RPs where there real isn’t a story but the RPers make the story up as they go along.
Okay, that sounds fine.
I am a little busy now a days, so I won’t be very helpful in getting the story moved along, so it may be better if you…
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Sure thing!
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
That’s totally fine! I think Duckator said the same thing.
By the way, if you do turn a character into an animal, you could make it so that they were always an animal, not turned into one. Either way, it’s up to you! I didn’t even think of having them know that they were once human! That’s a funny concept!
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
That’s totally fine! Thanks for letting me know.
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Esther replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ok! Thanks for the offer! 🤗
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Esther replied to the topic Question about religion in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
Everyone else had some fantastic points and I agree. God does everything with a purpose, and one of those purpose is to bring glory to His name. The angels were made to do God’s will and serve Him, right? Satan didn’t want to, yet time and time again we see Satan’s plans thwarted and God glorified. I like how Andrew put it:
God knew…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t write animal characters. I can’t get into it like people. lol.
Thanks for the invite!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Hey, sorry it took a minute.
How detailed does that usually get?
Oh it depends. Sometimes I only have 4 or so points, and sometimes it’s close to 16. It just all depends on what points I know I need/want to hit.
What do you mean by graphing characters?
I have a sheet with the character’s name at the top. Then I add age,…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
We haven’t started the RP yet, so there isn’t anything to read! I’m trying to get a good number of people with their characters before starting.
Um…Rax originally made this page, and he said no half-animals. I think we should stick to that. You could make a fully animal version of them, though. That would work.
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Just in case anyone is backing out because they don’t have animal characters, let me say: that’s okay.
You can create an animal character, or you can actually…[Read more]
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