Elishavet Elroi

@koshka   @whalekeeper

Aannnddd I’m left in the dust. What is it with you night owls?

oh boy, you mention “doctor” and Rory’ll flip out bad.

You don’t want to see that.

Rory

When Barnes actually took off her mask, Rory started in surprise a little. He had been preparing to surprise her and somehow get it off. He needed to see the face b…[Read more]

@esther-c

I agree with @koshka and @elishavet-pidyon

I would also add,

1. A lot of physical contact before marriage

2. Only being able to have a relationship when alone. I prefer that one of the first times this couple is alone is when he asks her to marry him. Show them getting to know each others families, hanging out at church, spending…[Read more]

@koshka   @grcr   @liberty   @keilah-h    @rae     @esther-c     @theducktator  @godlyfantasy12    @smiley    @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6     @whalekeeper   @linus-smallprint     @highscribeofaetherium     @anyoneelsewhomightbeinterested.

Have any of you seen The Man Who Invented Christmas? It’s the story of how Charles Dickens wr…[Read more]

@liberty

Yes, and the weird thing is I got two emails at once both saying the same thing. It’s like my last registration actually went through….. I hope being signed up two times isn’t a problem.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Leo

That was a valid idea, one he’d happily get behind if they could figure out a way. It might save them from another relocation.

“I don’t know, but I’m not experienced in convincing. Just disappearing and mechanics. If we could…” He glanced at Rory. Silvia was right. The boy did look like he’d seen a bit too…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Leo

He felt his teeth grit. He sighed.

“I… don’t know the name. Rory’s home, if you can call it that. It’s the government. Rory was one of their…soldiers, and I might have interfered with their…methods of administration. Which I’m not sorry for. They decided to mess with my siblings for some unexplainable…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Ah nougat. Been a while since I had that lovely sweet fluff. Or, kind of fluff.

Leo

Filing papers. Long hours with nothing but a dim lightbulb and the musty smell of ink and paper. Leo gave the poor woman a small smile.

He hoped the necklace wasn’t sticky.

“I’ve noticed the school inattention.” Used that…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hehe, thanks 😁😊

Lukas

Lukas watched as Livia played with water between her hands. He was captivated for only a moment before his eyes roved to her face. A listless, wandering look swam behind those bright blue pools.

Lukas knew it would be be easy for her with Xandro not being there–although that was good news for him. He…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!! 🥰

Sometimes it is for me, but in this book’s particular case, it needs some bigger edits (not like a whole revamp), and I didn’t feel like digging through that. XD

Yeah totally!! I’m hoping to create a topic for it soon! (Which reminds me…you posted something new on your WIP topic that I need to read!!)

@theducktator

First off…are the ingredients supposed to be fictional? (that’s what I understood from your post!)

So, clarification.

Are your characters the fictional ones…or the sandwich ingredients???

@whalekeeper

What about everyone else?

I’m planning on writing a serial story for the magazine I write for. It’s going to be very exciting since this will be the first “official” 10k thing I’ve written. Yup. I have not written anything long, yet! It’s been mostly short stories! I did write a 30k story, but it took me years to write that…and I…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Yay! I’m so glad you joined!

@ellette-giselle

Did the signup work? You will get a confirmation email. You should also check your spam/other email folders. It may have gone there.

@grcr

Yep! That’s the link. You should get a confirmation email pretty soon after you signed up.

@savannah_grace2009

Heyyy!!! 👋

How’s your WIP going??? Is it still the one in New Mexico (sorry I feel so behind on everything here lolll)

Naw, you’re good! I haven’t touched that one in a while actually. It’s a completed first draft, I’ve just been too scared to edit it. 🫣😂 I’m actually drafting a contemporary NA romance that starts in the Midw…[Read more]

@esther-c

1: love triangles. I fine them incredibly unrealistic and often ridiculous.

2: no communication. The entire plot should not be able to be resolved with a 5 minute conversation. Like seriously. This may be a problem in real life, but do I want to real a full 300+ pages about a couple misunderstanding each other because they aren’t…[Read more]

@everyone (I’m too lazy to actually tag people, LOL XD)

I hath dire need of thy input! ☝️

What are your romance pet peeves?

Yep, it’s just that question. (not irl, of course, but in fiction, lol)

@elishavet-pidyon

Gotcha!

@whalekeeper

Have fun!!

@ellette-giselle

You’re good. They kind of work together.