Jaybird

@savannah_grace2009

Not at all. Tag me whenever you want.

This is a really good chapter. Well balanced dialogue, not cheesy on the emotions, but enough to make you feel them. Well done.

(I’m really hoping for more Eloy in this draft. *hint hint*)

@linus-smallprint

Now THAT might have just been your best chapter ever. I could feel Alan, I could sense that he was completely trust the Saviour, yet there was also pain with it, but his grief was quiet by now. If you could make the grief in the chapter before this more forceful then it would beautiful contrast to the calm in this one.

Very…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I mean, this isn’t a matter of personal conviction. This is biological and physiological sense. Few who have sense would disagree with this.

exactly. But a lot of movies and books now days basicly have it be jyst because she’s a girl she can win sort of thing. You know, “girl power” *rolls eyes*

So yeah, I was glad that they didn’t do t…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Main character of Die Hard

(which IS a Christmas movie!)

@linus-smallprint     @mineralizedwritings

So my friends got me a ticket and I went into it ready to hate it. I hadn’t seen the trailer, but the cover had a girl in armor on the front, (small spoiler, she never ends up wearing armor ever.) She wears a tight costume for one of her outfits and I don’t love it, but all the rest of her outfits are…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

No? But then, I’ve never been to a theater, and my family doesn’t watch much. It looks interesting.

I did see the first 3 hours of LotR on a longish flight over Thanksgiving. The hobbits were hilarious.

@linus-smallprint   @stephie    @liberty     @hybridlore      @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr    @loopylin    @freed_and_redeemed    @mineralizedwritings    @grcr

Here’s the movie balled. Oh the music! It was amazing!!!

This is a story I can stand behind concerning women fighting. She fought when she was defending women and…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint   @stephie    @liberty     @hybridlore      @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr    @loopylin    @freed_and_redeemed    @mineralizedwritings    @grcr

HAS ANYONE SEEN THIS!!!!!????

It was amazing!!!! I saw it in theaters with friends and am now trying to scrape together the money to take my family! It was AMAZIN…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings    @grcr

My initial reaction when I open KP and people have changed their profile pics and now I can’t figure out who on earth this person is and why they are tagging me.

@linus-smallprint

Merry Christmas!!!

Oh I saw that coming! This is good, Linus. I do have one complaint.

 

This is an emotional moment, but I don’t see much emotion in Alan’s prayer.

I would suggest pausing in between fragments of prayer and describing what Alan is doing and feeling in that moment.

Exactly. This was just what I was thi…[Read more]

@liberty

yes!!! Yes it is!! The profile is Cora and the banner is the cover!!

have you read it!?!?

@liberty

oh me too! I love the redemption characters!!

wait! Rolf Klaus!! Not Rolf Klaus from The Baker Family Adventures?!?!

oh yes, I have often thought of that. I find so many aspects of writing a small reflection of God and us.

@whalekeeper

oh I was mostly teasing. Lol. 😂

I would never be comfortable in a place like that from what it sounds like, but Rory might go just because he has no idea what is going on and what a dance even is. lol.

we’ll see if he ends up peeking in there.

@ellette-giselle

I have a question: is your picture profile from The Winter King? And your banner picture?

@linus-smallprint

Great! Yes, this contest will run into the new year. I’ll check back in and give the deadline on the 1st.

@theshadow

Ok, great!

@calyhuge

look up Bukele and you’ll see

Okay, thanks!

@theducktator @ellette-giselle @anyone else

Sure! I can share the prompt soon, but have no set deadline until the next year. Give me a bit of time to think about the prompt.