Jaybird

@linus-smallprint

Well, thank you for venturing into new grounds! This does help freshen up this story from the others.

Thanks! That’s the goal!

linus-smallprint

All four gospels and Acts in one night? Wow. These guys love to read.

First off, that’s not THAT MUCH.

secondly, they started in the morning and went on through the night to the next morning.

thirdly, yes, they love to study.

Why do I have a feeling someone from Leon and Julian’s group is going to end up in these g…

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@raxforge

well good!!

XD

@elishavet-pidyon

Yes, he is the protagonist.

Thank you for your tips!

I use Bryce as Guy’s younger brother.

Guy and Bryce originally came from a different story that I had, and that’s where I fell in love with Bryce, but that story sort of to the shelf of books that would never be written. I was sad about that since I loved the brother…[Read more]

@raxforge

In the basement sorting nails and bolts with Leo.

….. I don’t know. *shrug*

@raxforge

Oh. My. Goodness.

Keep that creep away from my Rory or I swear the kid’s gonna die of fright! 😂😂😂

He’s traumatized enough already.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

The day passed, and the five young men explored the town. Everyone seemed to be very busy, and no one was interested in talking with them. So, the five decided to scout out the town and see what it was like. As Roland had said, the town wa…

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@whalekeeper

lol.

I was told the writing style wasn’t great either.

Have you read the original Rapunzel? Like, the 100 page narrative? Old, old, old.

@elishavet-pidyon

You have a BRYCE????!!! Oh my gosh! I absolutely adore that name because of one of my characters! I read Susan’s fan fiction story after the train accident. It was really good.

@liberty

Just emailed you about this!!!!!
IT”S SO GOOD!

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle

Big news! I just completed my first-ever mood board!!!! I’m so excited to hear what you all think! Do you all have any tips for making them?

Guy is my MC from my wip, Refuge Rangers. I’m planning to make boards for his men…and write a short story to go along with each…[Read more]

@keilah-h

WOW!!!! I LOVE IT!
What program did you use?!?!?!

@the_lost-journal  @keilah-h   @theducktator

@whalekeeper

Never read the HTYD books because someone told me not to and just stick with the movies.

Never read Princess Bride but I really want to!

There are two movies that were better than the book that I can think of off the top of my head……. but I forgot the second. XD

The bi…[Read more]

@hybridlore

First off,  @whalekeeper had an amazing suggestion for Cole and Sara! Love that!

Second, I like the synesthesia. It’s interesting and I don’t really know much about it so I feel like i’m uncovering something new as I read. I may be the odd number on this, but I personally enjoy it.

how about you, @linus-smallprint ?

@raxforge @loopylin

*Splutter of laughter*

Fish person? How is Syph like a fish person, pray tell?

Syph

So he didn’t have to “get a girl”, whatever that meant. He turned to give Ellie a grateful smile before shifting narrowed eyes to the Rax Boy.

What was that supposed to mean? A good natured challenge, or a patronizing ‘let the Little…[Read more]

@raxforge

Oh gracious. XD

What kind of trouble?

@hybridlore

I’m in Sunrise Peak as well!

Yeah, i guess so 🤷🏻‍♀️

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Thanks ladies!!

I’m kinda nervous to submit it, but idk why 🫣😂

@loopylin @raxforge

Syph

He had to what? He blinked at Eddie. A dark blue flush crept up his neck. Water droplets appeared and disappeared in the air around him.

“Oh. Guppies. For a dance? But I don’t know of any other spritelings to pair with. It could take an indefinite amount of time to even find someone who wouldn’t be—oh tadpoles—…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @liberty

I’m in Brookside Stories

one of the ladies emailed and said they are having tech problems at the moment. I think that’s why.