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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
Ember sounds so awesome!!
@the-rest-of-y’all
Do you guys wanna hear about my MCs families?? 😏 (It’s nine other charries, btw… 😅😂)
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Oof…yeah, I feel you…WAIT who are you planning on killing off?! I must know!! (It better not be Lukas, the baby is too precious…and I know you won’t kill off Ev or Ami…)
Yeah… um…
I can promise that it will not be Lukas. I think he’s going to be in a sequel with Skylar and Fynn, so neither will they die. And I would definitely[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHH!!!! It’s so good!!!!!!!!!! I almost cried! (That’s saying something, cause i like NEVER cry for books and/or movies) You did so gooooood!
Woo-hoo!!! 😆
(Same here, girl. XD)
Thanks so much!!! ☺️
i hate to give a critique on it, but you asked for some. My only thing is i would have showed a lit…
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Light replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Yay!! So glad you love it too!!! 😆
Yes!! 😄
Sorry to make you cry, but I’m so glad that my writing can be that powerful! 🥲😄
That’s okay…I guess I’ll be alright 😭😂 Yes girl!!
Thanks so much!! 😊
You’re so welcome! 😊
I know!! 😭
😭😭😭
Yes!! 🥹❤️ I pantsed my way through this and I was so happy with how that theme was taught to her. 🥲
Yes!! Y…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
Aw I love Ember!! And the aesthetic is really good! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Yay!! So glad you love it too!!! 😆
Sorry to make you cry, but I’m so glad that my writing can be that powerful! 🥲😄
Everything is so smooth, like the way she wrote the poem, I was so impressed at the way you wrote that, it’s perfect!!!!
Thanks so much!! 😊
And when he found her on the beach I was just 😭😭😭
I know!! 😭
The way she…
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Light replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
OH. MY. GOSH.
ESTHER!!! GIRL, THIS IS AMAZING!!! I’m just over here crying 😭😭😭😭
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 AHHH!! Everything is so smooth, like the way she wrote the poem, I was so impressed at the way you wrote that, it’s perfect!!!!
And when he found her on the beach I was just 😭😭😭
The way she realizes that true love is…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Fanfics are hard. 😅 Like, this may be the only one I ever do. XD It was easier because I got to create my own characters, instead of trying to write the author’s characters accurately. What are your fanfics of?
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Ahh!! Yay!!! 😆
I’m so glad you loved it!!
I’m just smiling reading through your post. Thank you so much!!! 😄😊
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Esther started the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @janellebelovedpig @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @light-warrior-pen @starshiness @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @orielle21 @sarafini @anyone-else-interested
Hey, guys!!
So I wrote some fan fiction. Yep, I did it, I finally succumbed. 😂
I know some of…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooh! Fun!!
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings
I cock my head as she disappears into the portal. I go up to the tree and try to open the door. It opens much easier than I expected. The light shines out, blinding me. With a smile and my curiosity getting the better of me, I walk through…
(Don’t know why that was in pre…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 5 months ago
I write poems occasionally! 😀 My more recent poems are better than some of the ones I wrote like two years ago. XD
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Light replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh my word!! I LOVE that 🤣🤣🤣 Poor November and Pax! 😅
And ARA!! That’s so funny!
Whoa how do you do that?! I love Finn!! He looks so fun!
And Lena is cool! Her eyes don’t look scary! I know how that is tho. One time I tried to draw one of my charrie’s eyes…*shudders* Never again XD
Aww great…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
At least you’re aware of it. That’s good. 🙂
It does get easier to write with unique voice though as you keep writing because you get to know your characters more. 😀
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Y’all gotta read this. XD
This is half of chapter one and all of chapter two from one of the first book I tried to write when I was 8 or 9. (Basically the first part of the chapter was where a 10 year-old girl named Zoey was outside and she got sucked into this tornado thing. XD) (Oh, and I’m leaving all the spelling, grammar, and positioning to…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh my word, I love that! XD I love reading old writing compared to recent writing. Lol
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Esther replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ok… 😏😁
(Oh, and I added something to my post up there. I don’t know if you missed it.)
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Esther replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ok, so I love the young thief trope. 😂 (When it’s done right of course 😉 ) So I think Brycen might end up being one of my favorites. 😁
Yeah, I figured I’d have to move some stuff around once the drafting was done. But hey, I’ll just surprise myself and magically have double the chapters that way XD
Right? XD
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