Jaybird

@rae

Ahhh! I couldn’t complete mine on time! I’ll post it for the judge (you) to read. Regrettably, it’s not 100% complete! I hope the place where I stopped at, though, is a good spot. Sorry! Hopefully, I’ll be able to finish the story next time. Anyway, I’m looking forward to what you think+the winner! You can comment on the story as well.…[Read more]

@rae

thanks

i’ll send it shortly.

i want to give it one more run to see if i can see any more typos

Anyone know when we’re submitting the stories today? Liuke do we just send them in any time, or are we supposed to send them in all together?

@the_lost-journal

*Bites nails*

yeah there is no way that story is real. Nope. No way.

If you are pulling my leg, you are in for some serious trouble my man. You have aroused the beast.

In an author.

Bad move.

I will have my revenge.

You had better not be pulling my leg.

@the_lost-journal

Okay.

I am about 99.9% this is payback because you have been at me ever since I tagged you instead of Beth.

So.

I think this is payback, and I think you’re kinda nasty and should be kicked off KP………….

Just joking.

But seriously.

Okay. I will not look at page again.

I refuse to come back and re-read your…[Read more]

And a cat attacking you?

Unless you have a little demon cat, I don’t think that would really happen.

@the_lost-journal

Okay. So, first off, I was freaked out.

Now, after reading that twice, I’m not.

I mean, how am I going to help you? You don’t even know where I live. And why would you be sending a message on KP during a time like this?

So, I’m going to decided that this is you being horrid, and then tentatively send it and hope I didn’t…[Read more]

@theducktator

Ha! We both have some good brother quotes!

*My brother hands me bag a rough draft he’d editted for me.*

“There was so much to mark in that. Have fun”

*I groan*

*My brother smirks* “I love being a holy terror”

My brother “I find so much satisfaction in forceful hand clapping. It satisfies my satisfactions needs”

@loopylin

Thank you so much! Yes, I love fancy cursive.

@jonas

How tall are they?

@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore @rae @raxforge @grcr

leon and Julian — Elderstrand (Group 1)

Leon stood and watched the way Ellis fought, trying to gauge the weakness in the creature. Thing. Knight. Whatever it was.

He didn’t have long to stand there. One of the things was coming for him.

Leon ducked a blow a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @hybridlore

I understand both your points. However, there are many instances in the Bible when God blessed or rewarded people after they told lies to save the lives of innocent people. Sabina brought up two such instances.

And, God has also told people to withhold truth/miss-lead. Like in 1 Samuel 16

The Lord said to Samuel,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

So, I think I can safely say which scenes you have added in and which ones were in the draft. I’ve run into this same problem several times. If my book is more then a year old when I do the re-writes and big edits, you can always tell what I wrote before and what is added. I think our style and skill develops the more we write,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh. You are not the first I’ve heard to say that, but I don’t mind that you don’t agree. Sabina does voice my own beliefs however, so I won’t be changing this.

I would be interested in your reasons behind why you don’t agree with her/my reasoning. Though keep in mind I won’t be changing this scene, so if you find it a waste of…[Read more]

@rae

Don’t look at me.

My guys are just normal people with some military training.

@whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge @loopylin @jonas

Leon and Julian —Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Julian looked up and his eyes widened. He yanked Leon back. “Look out!”

Leon spun, gripping his sword tightly. His eyes and mouth opened in shock. “What are t…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

This is one of the best ones yet!!

I’m curious, did you write this from scratch, or was it in the draft?

This was super well done, and I like everything about it. (though i did see a typo here and there.)

Very well done.

@linus-smallprint

Yes, it’s the Iliad and the Odyssey as a musicale and it was SO WELL done!

oooo, next chapter! Yay!

@linus-smallprint

BOTH!

hey, how did you know?

dun dun dun!

@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

LONG Section!!!!!

Darrien lost his job the next morning.

The Governor decided that if the main part of the city was rebuilt, the work could stop. This left a group of neighborhoods to the east in terrible disarray, and it wasn’t long before only thieves and war refugees inhabited them.

To e…

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