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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ooo, that does sound interesting. I’m gonna have to go see if I can find it.
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle ty for letting me know😅😆 AND AGASGSDJASVLKDBJACDHSBK GIRLLLLLL YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I HAD TO HOLD BACK A SQUEAL WHEN I READ ABOUT YOUR WW2 WIP!!!!! sbavdsadjobvkjidsdn AHHHHHHHHHHHH
@koshka flash fiction is hard but such great practice, yes😌
HOW. DARE. YOU.
I HAD NO INVOLVEMENT IN THIS…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Guys I’ll catch up on my snowballs later today I promiseeee
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Reuven is a common Jewish name in that era. I actually named my Character Reuven before reading The Chosen. They are not alike at all. But, it’s still a good name. I read The Chosen on Monday. I had already started my book the week before.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
It’s a very good book, but a difficult story. I would recommend it.
😂 It’s not even published yet!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
Alright, I believe now we are back on track.
I’ll put a little from the previous section in here. We are now back to just after Joseph’s letter to Sabina.
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Sometimes I feel so inadequate teaching the people, especially when I train up Mr. Caddick, Da…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh good. I saw this and I was like, “Oh no, it’s a long response. This might be bad.”
Didn’t your mother teach you not to slam doors around?
Didn’t you ever accidentally do it when you were in a rush and weren’t thinking? lol.
Someone’s going to need to snap him out of it eventually, but for now, this is good.
Good. Goo…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Reuven (Robert or Bobby) Malter is a Modern Orthodox Jew, and a teenage boy. He is smart, popular in his community, and has a head for mathematics and logic. His father wants him to be a mathematician when he grows up, but he desires to become a rabbi. then on the other side, Daniel (Danny) Saunders: a Hasidic Jew, who is also a teenager.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
*Splutter* Texans weren’t made for this much snow!
Three more steps. Calion stood gazing over the edge into the chasm below. A river threaded it’s way down there, cutting a blue seam through a rolling green wood. A mile, two, down. A misty cloud rolled by, blocking the view and pulling his gaze back to the jagged edge just a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
COPY AND PASTING THE TAGS DIDN’T WORK. I THOUGHT YOU GUYS SAID IT WORKED!
It does work. You just have to put about five spaces between each one, and make sure there are no “.” after each tag.
All I’ve ever done on KP is copy and paste.
It works.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
There’s Josef, who’s Aryan German, Reuven, who’s Jewish, and Werner, who’s a boy from the alps and became a doctor.
I don’t think I’ve posted anything with Werner yet.
I’m glad you like them!
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Do you mean the snippets from Crimson Rose? I really like them!!! So, I’ve heard a snippet of Josef and Reuven…perhaps one about the doctor, too? Wait, is he a doctor?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr @jonas
Leon and Julian —with Group 1
Julian slowly rose, his eyes narrowed. He took a few steps forward until he was standing right in front of Rogun. “Listen, I don’t know who you are, stranger, but Leon is hurt, and I think the best option is staying put.”
“Julian,” Leon calle…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Yes, Marta is blind. This is a huge hitch in the story………..
I do look for particular quotes like the ones I used, if that’s what you’re asking.
I’m glad I’m giving inspiration! Ooo, that sounds like such a cool story! I’d love to read it sometime! Mine takes place in Germany, because I find there are a lack of stories from…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Well, alright. I guess the snowballs can be a complement. lol.
what do you think of the snippets you’ve gotten so far?
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
She’s so cute! Is she blind?
Thanks for telling me about the photos! I’m actually writing a WW2 story currently. Well, I haven’t started writing it yet. It’s a journal of an evacuee during the Blitz. A friend of mine actually asked if I wanted to write this because she was doing it for a school project. We thought it would be…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I knew it was his wedding from the previous post. Just saying. lol.
Good perception!
Oh you nasty person.
Hey, you always write wonderful words. So, consider my snowballs as a compliment: I enjoy your writing.
“It’s still me,” Josef said, softly.
Aww! It’s so sweet! Fits perfectly with the soothing Shire music I’m listening to.
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