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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh…!
*gleeful laughter* does that mean this caught you off guard?
I’m kind of hoping that it will take a lot of time for Leon and Rolf to escape. So, in a weird way, I was glad to see the newcomers didn’t end up being friends, but enemies with a personal grudge against the heroes. I know there have been other dangers and we’ve…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @elishavet-pidyon @Keilah-h
NEXT SECTION!!!
“So, what do you think we’ll encounter in Clonabay?” Rolf asked.
“Sin and darkness,” Leon replied in a low voice.
Rolf glanced over his shoulder. “I hope Roland’s alright. I’ve seen him get hurt plenty of times, and this is about th…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m so glad!!
Did I do him right? (I’m not in the habit of drawing skeletal characters. XD)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
YES?!?!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.
Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Btw, did y’all see the watercolor Syph my sister posted to the art section a bit back?
Syph
“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”
Syph blinked, flushed blue, then white. The air in the classroom hung he…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
I need to work on consistency, which I get is mostly self-discipline (and which is something I’ve always had to work on, writing life aside). I want to write, but I don’t have to write, and there are many things in my life right now that I have to do. Setting aside a specific time to do what I want, even when I’m tired, has been hard. But I’m tr…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Callan’s….oof. I
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*Slowly freaks out*
November scenes!!! She’s writing again!! November! Ara! Ahhhhhhhhhhh-
*Freaking out escalates tenfold*
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Awww! Esther!!! That means literally so so SO much to me!!
I appreciate you so much, you’re amazing 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜
💕💕💕
So for a while I stopped writing altogether, because even when I would try to write happy things that didn’t include violence or too much evil or darkness, somehow the topic would always shift. And my heart was…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ha!
That’s kind of funny, but Julian would KILL anyone who did that to him.
Plus it seems a little cliched.
BUT, it was funny. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Got it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Okay, I’ll fix that. He was supposed to be joking. If he was joking would it work?
Sorry. Sometimes, I shy away from commitment and speak with uncertainty (that’s one of the ways my character, Eric, is like me). Maybe waiting until they are published would be a good idea, but yes, I will let you use them as a r…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I thought he might want to turn back and no longer continue with them at this point, seeing this as a sign to return to his village and be with Liesle (if I spelled that right). But he seems determined to keep going for the moment.
Yeah, Roland’s pretty stubborn.
Julian is sounding a bit like a mother here. (I’m not sure i…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I thought so.
A lot happened in that last section that I was hoping on feedback for, so it was surprising when you didn’t say anything. XD
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