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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
But Albee has…..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Why not?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!
One evening, Julian was walking home alone from visiting a family and bringing a basket of food Adeline had prepared for them. It was growing dusk, and he was almost out of the alleys when a voice hailed him. “You, stranger, it looks like y…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Noooo!!! You can put Rory in jail, but leave poor Leo alone!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
seems to be a mutual favorite!
Looks like that scene is a good one. 😁
I’m excited to see if/how Leon reaches Ian.
you may regret saying that…………..
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Koshka replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I have little idea. Maybe KeePers were discussing the relative violence of the various RPs…?
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Esther replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ohhh, haha, gotcha 🤪
yeah I actually had no idea this was where Wyoh originated!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Praying! <33
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I think whaley decided that he did.
Rory left him wounded.
Barnes found him dead.
*shrug*
BESIDES! The thug was beating him up and was gonna kill him!
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Koshka replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh, the creep definitely was, even if he didn’t realize it. His actions were begging for retribution.
Not like Rory didn’t practically kill an Agent in that alley, if I remember aright. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Do you have an actual game this is based off?
There were several games like this medieval children played, and later on they evolved to Jacks and Marbles. So in a way, yes.
Aww!!!😍 I love this part!
Me too! So glad!!
I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering the priest from his town when he says this…and how that guy wanted to sac…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
shooting stones
Do you have an actual game this is based off?
“A story of a great warrior hero who loves children and saves his bride,” Julian repeated. He looked at Roland who gave him a smile. “I think I know just the story.”
Aww!!!😍 I love this part!
“You do that,” Aelic replied coldly.
I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Well thank you!! Children characters always drive me insane. I dislike them so much because they are written so badly. We either have super tall toddlers or super short adults.
It’s something I really try to get right, so thanks for mentioning it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Really? How so?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I’ve always found that a wonderful way to connect with children and help them understand. I’m glad you liked it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh, sorry for devastating you.
Hmmm. We’ll have to wait and see.
Did you see the section I posted today?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I totally thought you’d be at me for separating them, but I guess you didn’t mind Rolf dropping out of the book.
I was devastated, but it works better with them getting split apart.
So, Rolf never shows up again?
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