Elishavet Elroi

@liberty

A girl in red plaid sits in the college library. Dreadful words – Assignment Due Tomorrow and Proyecto de Clase de Español? -waltz across the screen before her weary eyes. Those words have no business in libraries. Her sanctuary is become her prison. She sighs and clicks on her phone.

Smack

A wet clod of wintery chill flies into her…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

EEKERS. IT’S GODLY.

*Ambush hug*

I was holding onto hope that as long as your account hadn’t gone “anonymous” you’d still come back. How are the charries? November, Ara, Luna, Jocelyn, Grimm and Miss Raven? Any adventures? I’m trusting November recovered from the non-canon bout of scurvy.

I’m still writing… Running into plot…[Read more]

@power

Yay! Congratulations and a cup of cold cider! That was really good. The Black Mongoose struck again. Struck our heartstrings, that is.

@ellette-giselle

I’m glad you went ahead and judged it. I meant to step out last night. My second story was not coming. Besides, these stories were all really good.

@ellette-giselle

I expanded what I had to 202 words, but it’s still really flash fiction. Let me see if I can get my other idea in order.

Lol. This is hilarious. I finally wrote a short story I would consider submitting for this and it’s just 179 words long. Back to the drawing board. XD

@ellette-giselle

I was wondering if that was the inspiration. Rhoda is one of my favorite Bible characters. XD

@ellette-giselle

Hmm.

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I like it. 😄 I’m still suspicious about all this new governor has in mind, which is good in a literary sense. The events make sense even as they toss the next bit into suspense. This version is less intense than the previous one, but I liked having a period of quiet worry about what would happen suddenly change to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Noo! XD At least, I don’t think so. 🤔😉

@ellette-giselle

By the way, this article isn’t (or maybe it is) about psychological suffering, but since I’m pretty sure it’s point is what you’re intending in your stories, I’ll share it. It definitely changed the way I think of pain.

And it’s hilarious, so you know. Thought you’d enjoy.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ok, I will say that I enjoyed how it was carried off in this section. I agree with what @linus-smallprint said about that. It reminded me of The Healer by Dee Henderson. (A book about facing the grief of a broken world.) Very good.

What I say is redundant is the fact that it feels like more characters are dying than those who…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Eeellllllleeeeeeetttttttte………

Why shouldn’t you kill them? Well, because it’s getting redundant. I love your story and your characters. The setting has a unique feel of its own and the characters are compelling to say the least. However, unless you have a brand-new absolutely unseen point to make with more death, it may…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay!

Maybe. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

😊 Maketh my heart gladeth.

Does it fit how you pictured him? The plushie is yet unclaimed.

@ellette-giselle

Not sure. Maybe because he’s a guardian type, protecting his younger brother. Maybe because he reminds me of a centurion, and I always loved the centurions in the Bible. He doesn’t understand everything, but he has a strong sense of honor.

@koshka

Aha!

*pulls on gloves*

*Grabs gold pen*

Lisa was looking for that. You don’t want her looking for you instead!

*Looks around*

Oooo, nice story, Ellette. I like Julian.

I will post a character aesthetic, though. It has a bit of the backstory woven in, so I won’t be specific, but see if you can guess who it is! (I say like it’s not painfully obvious.) Whoever gets it right gets an imaginary plushie of this character OR his horse!

@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator

Mae Govenen! Thank ya’ll for your feedback. And I will especially thank you for tactfully reminding me to post the extra that fateful Thursday.

As we all know, the extra was not posted.

Fear not, nevertheless! Although we have not posted chapters, we have been writing them. And…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh! I love hearing about your progress. This is so exciting!

The aesthetics are exquisite! I love all the little peoples in them. They really show Riker’s tender heart.

Hans will forever be “a cold sore on the lip of life” like Anne Shirley puts it, but hey, what makes a better villain? I agree that he’s not flat, (dare I…[Read more]