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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
*erupts from snow fort*
Aha! Today I flingeth snoweth at thee!
@loopylin smack ×2
@liberty smack ×2
@freed_and_redeemed sma- nevermind. You have mercy for a day.
*pets chilly arsenal*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Um, what?!
Lol.
Idk… Maybe use my shoes, extra clothes, sawdust, and some of those heavy chains to make it look like I sank into the “bubbly creek” assuming the factories dump into the river so most likely create one. It’s risky, but the first thing that came to mind. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Here goes.
“Good morning, luv.” Aiche looked up from his fire, a smile in his eyes. His hood was off and his black curls tumbled cheerfully over his forehead. He looked younger than he probably was, and yet-
She settled down beside him. There was a wonderful smell in the air.
“Apples?”
“Our tree is over there. Eat, then I’ll show you.”
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Smack!
Yay! I’ve been creamed. Now I have eight snowballs….
*grins a disoriented grin*
*falls back into snow fort*
Let’s see what I can do.
Also, adorable scene! I like how you showed what Leon was thinking almost exclusively by his actions. It really made me feel like I knew him.
@ellette-giselle I’m glad you like h…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
Lol. Yeah, not very subtle. We’ve both said we were twins before in different places though, and no one thought anything of it. XD We’re not the only KeePers with twin siblings.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Aww. Thank you. ❤️ I take that as a very high compliment, since your style is a joy to read.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
That… Would be difficult. XD
Don’t know I I’m in the fast writers group, but for me, I’m not writing anything serious, just bits of stories that have been in my head for weeks. If this was my “actual” WIP it would take longer.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh you do, do you? Well, here goes a test run in that Other Idea.
The room was dim. Sunlight and it’s heat rarely made it through the windows.
Skeletal children, heads shaved free of lice, played on the coarse floor. Armenian mixed with Aramaic and Syrian. They were bits and pieces left over from the death march. Even the youngest, a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ooof! That hit me out of nowhere. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ok, here’s my dues.
“Be still, luv.” Her shepherd’s hands were soft from his many years tending sheep. He washed the cuts on her face with a gentleness that brought tears to her eyes.
“Aiche…”
“I know.” He looked away, jaw tight. Ellie swallowed.
“She made me.”
“It will grow back. For now, I am just glad you escaped.” He smoothed…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
It’s a whole lot of adorable nothing. I’m fascinated. If you publish it, I’ll buy it. 🙂
Wait. I was- oof!
*A muffled voice comes from my snow fort*
A counter attack….Yes…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I think there’s a Slavic theme going on. Lol.
I like them! And I’m a *little intrigued. Such beautiful names, such interesting faces!
Koshka is a big help with Slavic stuff. She corrected my stand-in name (first+patronymic) for the charrie above. XD
*Extremely
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Just wondering… Does anyone else do this?
While researching some stuff for school about Soviet era factories, I ran into The Picture. I’ve had this picture saved on my phone for years because the girl in it struck me in that “Story Detector” bit of my brain. I don’t know who she really was, or if I’ll even ever write her story as I hear it…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Winifrith has come to share a lot of my own struggles just as she shares a similar background. Because of this development, she’s been in my head lately. After getting splatted by you, I mentioned doing my next defense as her. 🙂
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Esther and Elishavet Elroi are now friends 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
*stumbles from beneath an insurmountable snow ball*
I LIVE!
Hidden words in world unknown gleamed in her blade. Winifrith tuned it and watched the reflected fire dance across the ceiling. A blade of Elisai, forged in the breath of the Lighted One. Some things were too sacred for wonder to grasp.
She sheathed it home by her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 1 month, 2 weeks ago
*Cough cough*
Well, yes. I’m an intense history/culture nerd. My typical interests cover clothing/daily life/religion. I don’t remember any good references off the top of my head right now. However, I’m always up for a challenge! I need to be looking into the 1900s anyway for a project today, sooo…
If I find anything I’ll share it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
(*cackles*)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh! *Squeel of glee* I love it. Her perspective is so different. And it made a lot more sense. Lol.
(Also something Calion would get himself into. Just saying.)
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