@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
I will post a character aesthetic, though. It has a bit of the backstory woven in, so I won’t be specific, but see if you can guess who it is! (I say like it’s not painfully obvious.) Whoever gets it right gets an imaginary plushie of this character OR his horse!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator
Mae Govenen! Thank ya’ll for your feedback. And I will especially thank you for tactfully reminding me to post the extra that fateful Thursday.
As we all know, the extra was not posted.
Fear not, nevertheless! Although we have not posted chapters, we have been writing them. And…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 months ago
Oh! I love hearing about your progress. This is so exciting!
The aesthetics are exquisite! I love all the little peoples in them. They really show Riker’s tender heart.
Hans will forever be “a cold sore on the lip of life” like Anne Shirley puts it, but hey, what makes a better villain? I agree that he’s not flat, (dare I…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Oh boy. Ok, this will be fun.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
YesYesYesYesYes!
My sister and I reverted to eleven year-olds the moment we found out. The amount of happy dances since then has been Citadel of Dreams worthy.
We have effectively spread the Natalian infection to multiple people in our church, and hopefully this next book will bring more loyalties. I feel like a Seventh Districter.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Yay! Congratulations, @ellette-giselle !
This has been so much fun. If we do it again, count me in!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months ago
That’s so much fun!
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Elishavet Elroi posted a new activity comment 2 months ago
Eeek, I forgot the phone died before I sent in my response. Now it’s very late, but anyhoo,
I’m doing well. Basically, I met concrete and it was not polite. Thank the Lord, the only real injury was a broken bone in my hand. It’s almost normal now. 🙂 -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Hobbe’s best friend!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Yay! Whenever I put symbolism in a story I end up awkwardly trying to figure out if people caught it without giving it away. For further clarification, look up the two flowers mentioned.
And we definitely need more fabulous books for young people!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
That sounds like a lot of fun! It’s a theme both Middle Grade and YA could need, so you can absolutely write it for both. I’m technically a young adult and I like animal stories.
And yes, Yigal was military. There’s a lot of flower/name symbolism in the story… did you catch it?
In the words of Calvin, that was STUPENDOUS.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Oof, that’s ok. 🙂 Hope you feel better soon!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
I’m so glad you liked it!
Yeah, it’s standalone right now, but who knows? 😉 I haven’t gotten to work seriously in much of my WIPs, so they’re more like Works Waiting For Progress or something like that.
A sub-series is a good idea! I shall await your return. =D And maybe get some of my homework done. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
My stories? Yes. This short story is a stand alone, but I have three WIPs. Currently, my goal is to finish a novela by Easter. It’s one I haven’t shared much about, but is pretty close to my heart. Plus it’s a better springboard than a 3 volume epic or a 5 book series. XD
You?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
*Squeals*
Yay! Like I said, it’s such an intricately pieced world.
Yeah, most of mine are in my head too.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Exactly! =)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Oh, I liked your story. The worldbuilding and premise was so unique! And the frame story layout was a good touch. Does it belong to a larger story?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Very true. It’s so much fun. XD I would add that we hope if we can connect to a reader’s heart, we can impact them in the long run.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Aw, thanks! (Why is it so fulfilling to hear your writing made someone cry? XD)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Oh, interesting! I love the Celtic folklore inspiration. Fairies are so creepy. XD It’s a fascinating premise.
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