Elishavet Elroi

@godlyfantasy12

Ok, I will.

*Mischievous cackling*

I do kinda want it to be Alyona, I just can’t make up my mind.

They are on good terms. Alyona is a bit of the “take me with you wherever you go, I’m with you to the end” sister, and fiercely loyal to her brother in a quiet and often unnoticed way.

Oh, and she might be a tiny bit competitive…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Ok, this is hilarious!

What does everyone think of my adding another character? (I know, that might make our already jumbled narratives even harder.)

She would be in the Buteries kneading bread, and she’d either be a 15 year old lass named Winifrith(from my other series), or Viktor’s 12(about) year old sister A…[Read more]

By the way, Viktor’s hair color is dark brown, soon to be black.

Oh, and you happened to ask about almost the first thing I came up with when I had the idea for this story. XD

@godlyfantasy12

It sounds a lot more in-depth than it probably is. 😏 I have lot more to go.

My ways?

A lot of mindless wonderings. And wanderings.

And spending a bit too much time in random history. I like gathering bits and pieces of real cultures and smashing them together. (And stealing ideas from other books.)

And talking it out to…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh! Sorry, you haven’t been there. 😉

I’ll try to explain.

There are three nations. No, make that four…

Let’s start at the beginning, shall we?

*Opens ancient scroll*

No, not that far back.

*Picks up a different one instead*

Wait, you just wanted to know what a Yartassite was, not the whole history of the Brother-Nations.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Great idea! Yes, he is a high commander in the, ahem, “Eirtanian” army. *Eye roll*

It’s mostly Dorwainian. Of course. No Eirtanian loyal to the Brother-Nations would be at all willing to be in his army.

Which is actually even better, taking Viktor into the situation.

Viktor doesn’t like Dorwainian soldiers, and for good…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Thanks! And yeah, it aught to be. It’s actually from a conversation I have in my book.

Even though I haven’t gotten there yet… XD

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, those are great too!

@godlyfantasy12
Augh! You did so well correlating the colors!

And now I want to share something, so…

That was a collage of mine for Viktor’s sister, Alyona.

@godlyfantasy12

Yes indeed, poor, dear Viktor.

I don’t know either. I really want to see Kilied’s response…

It’s okay, I mean, Viktor doesn’t mind too much. Not for now.

Okay, I just had to give Viktor some movement.

And great job, y’all! I’m enjoying reading these so, do much.

Viktor

Vikor shifted uncomfortably, conscious of the stranger’s questioning gaze.

He didn’t know if it was his hands or something else about him that had piqued the other boy’s… What was it? Suspicion? Amusement? Irritation?

The…[Read more]

Ocran

Ocran moved on down the passage, pausing now and again to wrap his wounded hand.

The filthy little beast.

He stopped at a window to clear his head in the fresh air.

They had escaped, again, and things were becoming strikingly familiar.

The Hawk had flown, and fledglings with him. Not even the news that the Hawk’s wife had died ever…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sounds great to me!

@godlyfantasy12

Amen!

It’s awful when one’s reply just vanishes.

@godlyfantasy12

Learning languages can be really hard, but they sure do help for name inspiration!

But it doesn’t help when it’s all in the language itself. XD

I feel your pain.

For the reason I am replying to you is tgat I am learning Hebrew.

Now please note that that is present tense! 😉 I’m not very far in.

Sometimes looking up things…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Actually, yes! Here it is.

“@elishavet-pidyon OH BOI OCRAN BE MAAAAAD BRUH XD

Jocelyn & Nyx

”Maybe give me a bit more warning next time before TOSSING ME INTO THE AIR?!”

”Sorry, love.” Jocelyn chuckled. “Though your expression was priceless!”

Nyx pouted. “You could’ve filled me in!”

“Umm, when exactly?” She…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! This is SO MUCH FUN!!

Ocran

”Lord Governor?! Two titles in one?!” She gasped in apparent admiration, “How amazing is that?! Nyx! Did you hear that!”

The beast wasn’t paying her any mind, of course, and instead was fairly foaming at the mouth in rage.

She stroked it’s head.

“Ah, ah, now Nyx, do be nice! Is that anyw…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Poor November!!

I think the scene is dramatic and highly interesting. Obviously, there is a lot going on in the background. I think the dialogue is very good, and definitely has my curiosity triggered.

(Random, but if you ever want good examples of verbal abuse in books, I don’t know if you’ve read it or would be interested, but…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ok! XD yeah, I almost went back and added more, but I didn’t want to clog the gears.

Ahem.

Ocran

There she was. The impertinent young girl with her nasty creature.

The girl, Jocelyn or whatever it was, smiled up at him, her teeth glowing bright in the light of the torches.

What was she getting at? She aught to be on her knees…[Read more]