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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
That… Would be difficult. XD
Don’t know I I’m in the fast writers group, but for me, I’m not writing anything serious, just bits of stories that have been in my head for weeks. If this was my “actual” WIP it would take longer.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Oh you do, do you? Well, here goes a test run in that Other Idea.
The room was dim. Sunlight and it’s heat rarely made it through the windows.
Skeletal children, heads shaved free of lice, played on the coarse floor. Armenian mixed with Aramaic and Syrian. They were bits and pieces left over from the death march. Even the youngest, a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Ooof! That hit me out of nowhere. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Ok, here’s my dues.
“Be still, luv.” Her shepherd’s hands were soft from his many years tending sheep. He washed the cuts on her face with a gentleness that brought tears to her eyes.
“Aiche…”
“I know.” He looked away, jaw tight. Ellie swallowed.
“She made me.”
“It will grow back. For now, I am just glad you escaped.” He smoothed…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
It’s a whole lot of adorable nothing. I’m fascinated. If you publish it, I’ll buy it. 🙂
Wait. I was- oof!
*A muffled voice comes from my snow fort*
A counter attack….Yes…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I think there’s a Slavic theme going on. Lol.
I like them! And I’m a *little intrigued. Such beautiful names, such interesting faces!
Koshka is a big help with Slavic stuff. She corrected my stand-in name (first+patronymic) for the charrie above. XD
*Extremely
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Just wondering… Does anyone else do this?
While researching some stuff for school about Soviet era factories, I ran into The Picture. I’ve had this picture saved on my phone for years because the girl in it struck me in that “Story Detector” bit of my brain. I don’t know who she really was, or if I’ll even ever write her story as I hear it…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Winifrith has come to share a lot of my own struggles just as she shares a similar background. Because of this development, she’s been in my head lately. After getting splatted by you, I mentioned doing my next defense as her. 🙂
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Esther and Elishavet Elroi are now friends 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
*stumbles from beneath an insurmountable snow ball*
I LIVE!
Hidden words in world unknown gleamed in her blade. Winifrith tuned it and watched the reflected fire dance across the ceiling. A blade of Elisai, forged in the breath of the Lighted One. Some things were too sacred for wonder to grasp.Â
She sheathed it home by her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 2 weeks, 6 days ago
*Cough cough*
Well, yes. I’m an intense history/culture nerd. My typical interests cover clothing/daily life/religion. I don’t remember any good references off the top of my head right now. However, I’m always up for a challenge! I need to be looking into the 1900s anyway for a project today, sooo…
If I find anything I’ll share it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
(*cackles*)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
Oh! *Squeel of glee* I love it. Her perspective is so different. And it made a lot more sense. Lol.
(Also something Calion would get himself into. Just saying.)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
A girl in red plaid sits in the college library. Dreadful words – Assignment Due Tomorrow and Proyecto de Clase de Español? -waltz across the screen before her weary eyes. Those words have no business in libraries. Her sanctuary is become her prison. She sighs and clicks on her phone.
Smack
A wet clod of wintery chill flies into her…[Read more]
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Liberty and Elishavet Elroi are now friends 3 weeks, 3 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
EEKERS. IT’S GODLY.
*Ambush hug*
I was holding onto hope that as long as your account hadn’t gone “anonymous” you’d still come back. How are the charries? November, Ara, Luna, Jocelyn, Grimm and Miss Raven? Any adventures? I’m trusting November recovered from the non-canon bout of scurvy.
I’m still writing… Running into plot…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Yay! Congratulations and a cup of cold cider! That was really good. The Black Mongoose struck again. Struck our heartstrings, that is.
I’m glad you went ahead and judged it. I meant to step out last night. My second story was not coming. Besides, these stories were all really good.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
I expanded what I had to 202 words, but it’s still really flash fiction. Let me see if I can get my other idea in order.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Lol. This is hilarious. I finally wrote a short story I would consider submitting for this and it’s just 179 words long. Back to the drawing board. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
I was wondering if that was the inspiration. Rhoda is one of my favorite Bible characters. XD
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