@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
@esther-c @liberty @ellette-giselle
OK. There won’t be as many more scenes from this story that I’ll share, but here you go. Its 95o words should render me free from all residual snowball debts I owe.
Tada…………..
She laughed as she dusted her hands free of crumbs.
From the sounds coming from the nearby cotes, the other shepherds were…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle
Ok y’all. I redid the math and I owe you collectively 900 words. Here’s 257 words, which heals me from whatever damage done by Min and Loopy’s snowballs and puts me toward toward finishing Elllette’s. XD
Just beware y’all. To my most recent calculations, I have 46 snowballs in the arsenal.
Sir…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Yeah… We’ll see. XD I want you to love them before you know who dies. It’s a pity, because it’s such a great weapon. 😉
Ah well. To hear is to obey.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
lol. Well, you will get some more of it, although you might also get some scenes from other WIPs. I have Audrye and the team on my mind today. It’s a pity you don’t know them enough or I’d share A***n’s death as vengeance. Or maybe his mother’s. Or maybe Yosi’s nightmares as “character development”.
I am in a dangerous mood. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
*shriek of dismay*
Why?????????? @loopylin @mineralizedwritings already got me x3!
You are plotting your own demise.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @&c.
Welp. It was actually rather difficult, but it came together quickly in the end.
*bows*
This is Aiche, one of the king’s shepherds. He’s got a lot on his mind, but there’s hope yet. There’s always hope.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks ago
I’m glad you like it! That is one of my favorite parts too.
Yeah, more or less. Military stuff is good too.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
OK! Here’s 70 words from your new favorite story. Happy now? XD
It was a simple breakfast of apples, flat bread, and a strong, white cheese. It would have been scorned by her foster mother, but oh, how good it was! And as she ate, Aiche told her stories of the things he had seen in the hills. They were curious stories that sent a tingle…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Ok. Here is 100 words exactly. Only 50 more to go! Beware.
There was something mysterious about the Grey Wood. Viktor tugged a fern straight and watched it spring back into a tight curl the moment he released it. The undergrowth was deep enough to hide anything. Animals, people, or castles.
Nadian’s shriek echoed behind him. Vi…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks ago
Here’s an aesthetic for Project Golden Songs, my new WIP. (It’s the one with the shepherd Aiche) (boy don’t I have a thing for shepherds. XD) I’m not dumping my other two, just trying to get this written.
Meet Elline, daughter of kings. She’s had a rough time of it, but she’s made of sterner stuff than most think.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Everyone needs a snow fort.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
*erupts from snow fort*
Aha! Today I flingeth snoweth at thee!
@loopylin smack ×2
@liberty smack ×2
@freed_and_redeemed sma- nevermind. You have mercy for a day.
*pets chilly arsenal*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Um, what?!
Lol.
Idk… Maybe use my shoes, extra clothes, sawdust, and some of those heavy chains to make it look like I sank into the “bubbly creek” assuming the factories dump into the river so most likely create one. It’s risky, but the first thing that came to mind. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Here goes.
“Good morning, luv.” Aiche looked up from his fire, a smile in his eyes. His hood was off and his black curls tumbled cheerfully over his forehead. He looked younger than he probably was, and yet-
She settled down beside him. There was a wonderful smell in the air.
“Apples?”
“Our tree is over there. Eat, then I’ll show you.”
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Smack!
Yay! I’ve been creamed. Now I have eight snowballs….
*grins a disoriented grin*
*falls back into snow fort*
Let’s see what I can do.
Also, adorable scene! I like how you showed what Leon was thinking almost exclusively by his actions. It really made me feel like I knew him.
@ellette-giselle I’m glad you like h…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Lol. Yeah, not very subtle. We’ve both said we were twins before in different places though, and no one thought anything of it. XD We’re not the only KeePers with twin siblings.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Aww. Thank you. ❤️ I take that as a very high compliment, since your style is a joy to read.
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