@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @&c.
Welp. It was actually rather difficult, but it came together quickly in the end.
*bows*
This is Aiche, one of the king’s shepherds. He’s got a lot on his mind, but there’s hope yet. There’s always hope.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
I’m glad you like it! That is one of my favorite parts too.
Yeah, more or less. Military stuff is good too.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
OK! Here’s 70 words from your new favorite story. Happy now? XD
It was a simple breakfast of apples, flat bread, and a strong, white cheese. It would have been scorned by her foster mother, but oh, how good it was! And as she ate, Aiche told her stories of the things he had seen in the hills. They were curious stories that sent a tingle…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Ok. Here is 100 words exactly. Only 50 more to go! Beware.
There was something mysterious about the Grey Wood. Viktor tugged a fern straight and watched it spring back into a tight curl the moment he released it. The undergrowth was deep enough to hide anything. Animals, people, or castles.
Nadian’s shriek echoed behind him. Vi…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
Here’s an aesthetic for Project Golden Songs, my new WIP. (It’s the one with the shepherd Aiche) (boy don’t I have a thing for shepherds. XD) I’m not dumping my other two, just trying to get this written.
Meet Elline, daughter of kings. She’s had a rough time of it, but she’s made of sterner stuff than most think.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Everyone needs a snow fort.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
*erupts from snow fort*
Aha! Today I flingeth snoweth at thee!
@loopylin smack ×2
@liberty smack ×2
@freed_and_redeemed sma- nevermind. You have mercy for a day.
*pets chilly arsenal*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Um, what?!
Lol.
Idk… Maybe use my shoes, extra clothes, sawdust, and some of those heavy chains to make it look like I sank into the “bubbly creek” assuming the factories dump into the river so most likely create one. It’s risky, but the first thing that came to mind. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Here goes.
“Good morning, luv.” Aiche looked up from his fire, a smile in his eyes. His hood was off and his black curls tumbled cheerfully over his forehead. He looked younger than he probably was, and yet-
She settled down beside him. There was a wonderful smell in the air.
“Apples?”
“Our tree is over there. Eat, then I’ll show you.”
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Smack!
Yay! I’ve been creamed. Now I have eight snowballs….
*grins a disoriented grin*
*falls back into snow fort*
Let’s see what I can do.
Also, adorable scene! I like how you showed what Leon was thinking almost exclusively by his actions. It really made me feel like I knew him.
@ellette-giselle I’m glad you like h…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 5 days ago
Lol. Yeah, not very subtle. We’ve both said we were twins before in different places though, and no one thought anything of it. XD We’re not the only KeePers with twin siblings.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 6 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Aww. Thank you. ❤️ I take that as a very high compliment, since your style is a joy to read.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
That… Would be difficult. XD
Don’t know I I’m in the fast writers group, but for me, I’m not writing anything serious, just bits of stories that have been in my head for weeks. If this was my “actual” WIP it would take longer.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Oh you do, do you? Well, here goes a test run in that Other Idea.
The room was dim. Sunlight and it’s heat rarely made it through the windows.
Skeletal children, heads shaved free of lice, played on the coarse floor. Armenian mixed with Aramaic and Syrian. They were bits and pieces left over from the death march. Even the youngest, a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Ooof! That hit me out of nowhere. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Ok, here’s my dues.
“Be still, luv.” Her shepherd’s hands were soft from his many years tending sheep. He washed the cuts on her face with a gentleness that brought tears to her eyes.
“Aiche…”
“I know.” He looked away, jaw tight. Ellie swallowed.
“She made me.”
“It will grow back. For now, I am just glad you escaped.” He smoothed…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
It’s a whole lot of adorable nothing. I’m fascinated. If you publish it, I’ll buy it. 🙂
Wait. I was- oof!
*A muffled voice comes from my snow fort*
A counter attack….Yes…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I think there’s a Slavic theme going on. Lol.
I like them! And I’m a *little intrigued. Such beautiful names, such interesting faces!
Koshka is a big help with Slavic stuff. She corrected my stand-in name (first+patronymic) for the charrie above. XD
*Extremely
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