Elishavet Elroi

@koshka

Just gotta say, I love Quincy and Leo. Their dynamic is precious.

@godlyfantasy12

Ooooo!!! I love this section!!!

Ok. Callan is a knave, and that was creepy, but well done. This description of him made me laugh:

Callan’s voice sounded like something that crawled out of a swamp.

And November facing someone he fears to protect Ara was AMAZING. And her Uncle is fantastic. Being a PK myself, I loved his c…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

*Sniff*

That’s beautiful. I love how realistic his theme is. I wish more books addressed the need to love God first. Knowing God is the deepest, innate need of us humans. But it’s too easy to see that on paper and not draw it out in real life.

What really crushes me about the situation he’s in right now, is that when he sees…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ok. You about made me cry.

That is so sad. I can see November’s motives so clearly that it’s painful, because it’s just… So true, and yet so, so wrong. Riven is using the truth to tell a lie. And poor, sweet November is caught in the middle. Riven using affection to manipulate November breaks my reader-heart.

I could pound…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lol!

*Viktor sees it*

What? I don’t… Oh. Oh! That’s funny. *Laughs so hard it sounds like a duck*

@whalekeeper

It would definitely depend. Lol.

In Eirtan, I would stick out like a sore thumb, but the people are very nice. They might laugh at me, but one or two of the more respectable people would help me out. As long as I avoided Raiders and Dorwains and didn’t drown or suddenly become alergic to sheep, I would be fine. If I met up with the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin

Aw, Hugo.

Viktor

It was nice to be part of a group. The chipped plaster work on the ceiling smiled down at them from between florescent lights. Viktor adjusted his bag with a smile.

He would have offered to lend Lois his books, but he was relieved when Hugo had. Viktor had notes scribbled in the margins, and his…[Read more]

@loopylin

Those are splendid. XD I love it. That is pretty accurate. In cannon, Viktor almost gets arrested for existing in the wrong place at the wrong time. Hehe.

@ellette-gisselle Well, considering Leo is an international outlaw…. He’s probably seen the inside of prison a few times, if only in his dreams. XD

@savannah_grace2009

Wow. Wyoh had such mysterious origins. XD

@whalekeeper Oh no! That is a valid excuse. I hope you’re feeling okay. I’ll be praying for you.

@loopylin

Concerning the characters…

Viktor

A pleasant chime sounded from the depths of the library. Viktor smiled slightly.

Then he realized the others weren’t smiling. Hugo sighed.

“You better check your schedules. This might be an unlucky…[Read more]

I need to write too. XD

Actually though, I’m trying to make my writing itself be consistent. I’m finding it hard to keep a balance of action/description/dialogue. That makes it even harder to write, because what I do write doesn’t even sound like the same book. Or needs a lot of action to connect it, but not summed up, sped through action like…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

AHH! Godly is here!

*Hugs*

What do we have here? A November scene?!

*Excited reading*

*Meets this Callan and his cuckoos.*

Who is this creep?

*plots to cause him destruction*

*finishes reading*

Aw, November, it’s not your fault, dearie.

Great section! Grammatically, the writing is rough, but the scenes flows well. Vivid…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.

@whalekeeper

*sees clean gesture drawing*

*is in bliss*

I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…

I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ah! Hi, Lois! Your sister is intense. XD Alyona and Nadian are roughly her age, but the girls are homeschooled currently. They weren’t ready to attend another school. And they’re definitely behind her in grades. They do need developing, though.

Having the boys in the same first class sounds like a plan to me. @whalekeeper what do you think?

@stephie

Basically what everyone has said. XD

But since I must have my own take documented..

I believe everyone it on a path either towards for away from God. Everyone is seeking the One that can fill the hole in their lives. If you have that, then you have a duty to share it. Similarly, if you believe others will actually face eternal doom,…[Read more]

@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator

It is being attempted. *cracks knuckles*

@liberty

Ah, your moodbard is beautiful! You did a fantastic job! I’m curious about this fellow. Is he a protagonist?

Whatever tips I have may be irrelevant since I can see them in your work already. Basically, look for coordinating colors and moods between pictures, and play with a style until you feel like it fits the character. Also, choose…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I sympathize with the soundtrack issue. I imagine scenes and plot points behind almost any instrumental song. But when it’s from Apollo 13, which I have never watched… I’m not perfectly comfortable just connecting the two. And of course it fells awkward to explain to people. XD

Like, no. My book has nothing to do with Lord of the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

LOl! It is kinds my profile here too, so I might have to apologize for being confusing. XD

CWW has some good memories though…

I can totally see that in your writing. For some reason that sentence just sounded a lot like some of the shorter snippets I’ve read from you.

Really? Now I’m curious. XD I’m always interested in how my w…[Read more]

@loopylin

Aw, I forgot Marcel was taking Ellie. I don’t know how. I love a good friend dynamic. Those two are so cute.