Elishavet Elroi

@mineralizedwritings

You should absolutely read it! And yes, EXACTLY. If there isn’t hope for afterward, it makes it feel like the whole plot just isn’t worth it. (Then again, I did enjoy Resistance by Jennifer A. Neilson, but even then, it was a story of a girl learning to hope, not the other way around, even though there were times when she…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You don’t sound pushy to me! 🙂 I understand; I like this too.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h
Ok, so it started to rain, and as much as I love music, I love rain more. So, I can write now, since rain-song doesn’t interrupt my words like lyrics do.

Viktor

There was a sound, just a faint one carried to them by some unfelt draft from far down the passage.

A cry?

Riker knew. He spun away,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah, I don’t really know the back story anyway, just that it’s of a young boy in Hitler’s Youth.

And well, it electrified me the first time I saw it.

@godlyfantasy12

Ok, I see it’s Paxton, and I’m like, “aww.”

Then I saw that picture.

I know that picture.

And then I was like, no. Just. No.

XD but I love it, the way it all fits together and I’m on edge. It’s so perfect. Yay, Paxton!

@godlyfantasy12

And yes, it is time.

I am prepared.

*Deep breath*

*Clings to couch arm*

@freedomwriter76

I love Jezyk’s picture! It’s exquisitely him.

And the different races of elves makes much more sense. I like it!

And oh, Fin…

Also, you got to participate in a reenactment!? I love historical clothing and reenactments…. If only it paid well. (Or at all.) Just know, that’s my dream job.

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, wow. They’re…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

You’re welcome!

(Good! Yes, it will, and that’s soooo awesome! Then his kids’ll be half-elven and… Oof, yeah they won’t be happy, but hey, who said they had to be? 😉 )

@whalekeeper

Oh, thank you so much! I’m SO thrilled you like it.

So, as a premise… I’m not great at writing premises. But I’ll try!

So, the story is a five books (currently) series beginning with two boys in different kinds of bondage. One, Alwin, is in the kind you see easily. But even if it’s easily identified, that doesn’t make it simple…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh! I honestly can’t tell how many books inspired my writings, (you know how it is.) But there are definitely some key ones.

In all honesty, it was reading the Green Ember series that first made me seriously consider writing more than just a short story or two for school. That shows a lot in the story I started then. There…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yes! Ocran had better look out.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

And is anyone ready to read the next chapters in The Institution? We have three more!

Chapter 2

Wilkins

Wilkins sighed, pinching the bridge of his nose. None of the words on this page made sense. In fact, none of the pages in this book did either.

The sunlight glowing in the window panes had matured, then…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh, I love this new plot! And also how you are using elves as Jews. It’s soooo perfect.

(I hope that makes sense and isn’t weird. My sister and I are using elves in a half-allegorical way as children of Light and that belong to a better place.)

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, I like that! Honestly, the term “fire elf” reminds me of a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I’m on right now, although I’ll have to get off again and do another math lesson. (Homeschool… XD)

@koshka @freedomwriter76 Leon and Riker wouldwbe awesome to see seven years down the road! Only, I wouldn’t be able to use Viktor, because of spoilers. (Although if I did I could add in Reúven… Or Fritz! That’s a good…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka  @godlyfantasy12

Viktor

Thank the Lord, Riker and November had been able to talk, and even as Viktor sensed something deeper in some places, he decided not to stir the waters anymore than need be.

And now…

November was embarrassed and frightened. Viktor knew how he felt.

November was also thinking, remembering, a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ack! No!!!

*Throws my phone at you*

That’s horrible…ly good?

Okay, it’s awesome and I love the way each of these twists are really possible inside the character, but…

*Retrieves phone with a sigh*

Although, the foreboding hints about Ara are not unnoticed, by the way.

And I hope you aren’t killing her, but if you…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

WHAT?!

I loved it and now this?!

But now I’m very curious, to be honest. XD

@freedomwriter76

I don’t know who my favorite is, because they’re all very imagination sparking and I love them.

I think I like Esther’s picture the best, but once again, I don’t know!! XD

@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Oh boy. Here we go!

Ocran

Such unexplainable incompetence! He stalked up the corridor, smelling the mounting fear.

They had a right to fear. A Lord Governor was hardly someone to trifle with.

Much more powerful than a mere shepherd. A mere Under Shepherd at that.

He commanded and a ca…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ah, thank you! That means a lot. Have fun!

@koshka @freedomwriter76 (I think he’s about to show himself. I hope he doesn’t get in your way, but I’m laughing so hard!) @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

The Fly on the Wall 

Bucky had fled with the little maid, finally pursuaded by her father, and perhaps his own sense of honor.

The two men…[Read more]

Also a humorous/interesting thing; this is a comparison of her mother’s hair and her own. Except, Winifrith’s hair is redder than in this pic, and may be a hand’s breadth longer, about hip length.

(Fun fact, Aethel was originally inspired, not by a great theological question or profound event, but by me daydreaming about hair. Specifically long,…[Read more]