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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Ok, let’s go!
Viktor
Tall walls loomed above them, trapping them into a place that smelled too much like horses and people. Viktor scrunched his nose and cut a glance at the boy beside him.
Reúven relaxed against the wall, his arms crossed in a manner that was both comfortable, and that allowed him to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ach, I know! But I’m really glad it makes you feel that way.
You do. 😉
Haha! Seriously though, I like the earlier medieval fashions for a reason! XD
William’s “hose” is the same thing.
Awwwwwww, I can totally imagine him like that and it’s soooo cute!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
And lastly, (for now)
William. Brown blonde hair and green eyes, he is tall and broad shouldered. And serious, very serious. Although, among friends he will open up more and maybe even laugh. It’s not that he’s stoic per se, just that he’s… William. Very loyal and protective of those he loves, it’s b…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Yay! She might show up… I’m still not quite sure,since it really does change so e stuff with my timeline, but that the same time, I’m like: “ditch the timeline!” XD
As for my charries getting people… I literally have no idea. Just probably not my other characters. I really don’t know, though, so…
If I added Winifrith, I’d…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Next! (And sorry, I didn’t tag in the last two.)
Yes! Viktor is staying, and I also want to add…
Alwin. Has black hair that is cut fairly short, a rough ivory complexion, and thoughtful dark blue eyes. He is somewhat tall, but thin from lack of nourishment as much as from genetics.
Quiet but driven, h…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Anyway, it’ll completely change where he is in his arc…
Or maybe I’ll just add her and ignore his arc, because… Well, spoilers.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Viktor. Not much different physically than before, except for being a bit more attuned to fighting, and a little older. On the inside, though, he’s changed… but he’s not sure in what ways.
(Haha, neither am I.)
BUT AN EXTREMELY IMPORTANT QUESTION: does he, or does he not have his eagle? I leave it to y’all.
Age just 15
And just so you know h…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Okay, so I’ll try to introduce Reúven (Fritz) first…
Reúven. A laugh dances in his hazel eyes, but the set of his chin is determined. He has the soft calloused hands of a shepherd and the fleet feet of one. Which is a blessing, because he has given those feet to his lame father. What started in fe…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ahhhhh, I love them all. (But Paxton just about tore me up, the poor wee darling. Do you need someone to find him?) And LUNA!!!!!!!!
Yeah, she’s made her own special place in my heart. XD
And she’s really making me want to add in Winnifrith.
So, I think Alyona is not here this time, and Viktor and Reúven are on one of their…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
ALSO, I think y’all will get to meet…
REÚVEN ELROI!
Because I just realized how much I need to practice writing him…
But I think you’ll also get to meet…
Alwin and Willaim
So, at this time in the timeline, Alwin and William have been free for about three-four years. I think. It about one-two years. The question is, do you want Bible Co…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
The AU sounds really fun! XD Although honestly, the idea of an elf making coffee was rather funny….
Wait. Okay, now I’m seeing Inglor meeting Halt from Ranger’s Apprentice.
Inglor:Â What is this dark drink? It tastes rather bitter.
Halt:Â (under breath) That’s the taste of good coffee.
Will:Â Uh, add honey. Lots of ho…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @e-m-trepke @godlyfantasy12
Yes, I do! Sorry it’s been a bit since I”very managed to respond, but now I’ve got ideas, so we’ll see what happens.
Alyona
They were leaving. Alyona bit her lip to keep back the sudden tears.
And to think she’d been anxious to get away from them at first!
But… Jocelyn and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I did,did it go through? I’m seriously wondering if it didn’t. It should be on the previous page.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
I understand! But you’ll get there! Her character is so sweet and just good.
And this has helped me with my characters too. A lot.
By the way, there’s hope! Legolas is said to be Tolkein’s least developed character, and yet if someone is going to have a secret favorite, it’s probably him. (Secret because they never seem to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
YES!!!!!! Oh, it hurts so much, like when I read all the times Jonathan literally snuck out to see David and encourage him… And I know what happens in the end… And I just want to cry.
Especially when I think, Does that still happen today?
(Oh, and Corvina’s collage is really good! I think it’s so interesting how you can…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Okay, so Luna…
Has slowly been becoming my favorite. I know I know like near nothing about her, but… She’s still climbing up there.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
(Thank you! I think she’ll keep her name. Lol.) Oh, I love the story (especially the story’s theme. That is deeply beautiful.) and the collages! The kiddos are very sweet.
I think I like Leon’s better, just because his childhood coloring is literally my own, so… It’s kinda interesting to see. XD but Riker’s big blue eyes are…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h@e-m-trepke @koshka
All righty! Let’s get this end started.
Also, I think I might poof Viktor too, because then I could add in Reúven, and I really want to see those two together. Plus, I realized that I do need to develop the later version of him.
But then again, I COULD ADD ALWIN INSTEAD. And if I added him, I’d hav…[Read more]
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