Elishavet Elroi

@godlyfantasy12

Did I ever mention that I love coats? Especially overcoats and great coats.

So… I’m really enjoying Grimm’s clothing. A lot.

@godlyfantasy12

Of course! Do you jest? Please show us the darlings.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

By the way, I think Reúven is an early grower, so he’s near 6′. Viktor has been in the midst of a growth spurt since you last saw him, so he’s more like 5′ 7″ now.

Viktor 

The door had opened to reveal a familiar face. Two, in fact. Viktor’s eyes went wide, and he saw November’s jaw fall s…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Right. I’ll get to it!

*Is very glad you managed to dodge*

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

Bam!

*The door flies open*

*I skid in with a crash and a yelp*

Hi, y’all! I’m back.

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

@mineralizedwritings

Oh no! I never responded! (A quick warning: if I drop off in the midst of a conversation, I probably thought out a whole reply, and since it was written in my head, I thought I’d written it on here. I usually realize I didn’t, but it may take a while.)

I’ll consider it for later! I’m so burnt out after reading North! Or be…

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@freedomwriter76

Understood! 🙂 Yeah, we can enjoy re-meeting Riker and them all as their future selves.

@godlyfantasy12

You should!

I think they are horrible people, but as such are wonderful characters. I really like the callous way they interact, the apparent lack of real brotherly love. (Although that sounds like an awful thing to like……[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

And I say it once again. I love how the Grim/Nyx/twins RP is going. It is so much fun to read!

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

And warning: my pen wandered away into the days of iron. Which means… Well, you’ll hear the change.

Also! I’m using this RP to test their dialogue. Alwin is using the less formal “thee” and “thou” because of his very less formal upbringing. I think he may do this in the book, although he mostly drops it…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Actually, I do!!

So, I don’t know who they’d meet or anything, but I’ll do an RP for William and Alwin.

@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

All right!

Reúven

The boy was lost. Reúven understood that: he had been too. Many, many times.

He held the door open, waiting to go, to look, to find. Because he was Reúven Elroi, and he would find. Just a moment for November to adjust to the light again.

“Do you two…ah, know your way around here?…[Read more]

I don’t think I have any antagonists that are clearly defined enough to add. I mean, ya kinda have to know who they are.

Anyone else?

@godlyfantasy12

I was wondering!

@freedomwriter76 godlyfantasy

Sounds great to me! Reúven likes little girls, and Viktor would love to meet them both again.

@theloonyone

Oh, it’s fine, but thank you for redoing it!

Your WIP premise is so creative! And I totally get the “my book is running away from me” feeling! XD it’s happening to me currently.

Although, I do have one story that took a very romantic turn like that. Although, I don’t know if it’s exactly a “romance” because although that part is a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @godlyfantasy12

Viktor

Something wasn’t right; this was no pleasant coincidence. Viktor’s mind spun as he took in November’s shaken state.

It wasn’t something on the outside, something tangible. It was something else.

Thoughts.

Forebodings.

Memories.

“That…ah…that would be nice. Better then traveling alone, I suppo…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!

I’m called Elishavet around here, and I mostly write realistic medieval fantasy, with a touch on the allegorical. (So fancy, I know. 😉 )

Your WorkInProgress sounds interesting! What is it about?

Also, short stories are awesome! I haven’t written many; in fact I think I’ve only written…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I love your characters! They are so wonderful!

As for Reúven?

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BWAHAHA! I just had to do that, sorry. XD but the answer is that I don’t know. He… He goes through a lot…

Do you remember the two characters I mentioned on the spoiler forum? Do you also remember that…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

Okie dokie.

Reúven

Big blue eyes stared at them from under a mop of ginger hair. Then they focused in on Viktor.

“V-Viktor?”

This boy knew his brother?

“November!” Viktor’s face lit up. “Peace to you, brother. I’m so glad to see you again.”

The red head’s eyes widened a little more and he blin…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Wait, wait, wait.

WHAT!?