Elishavet Elroi

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Three things.

Grimm is amazing! He has earned himself a very loyal friend just now.

And – WHO DOES HITCHENS THINK HE IS, A MADMAN? If so, then he’s right.

Second, IT’S LEON!!! I love that guy.

Also, if the others come right smack into this…. O.O

Anyway…

Yosí

“What’s he look like?”

He stumbled, the li…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Yosí

His mind stumbled a bit before gathering all the names. The little girl named Naja watched him with large eyes, innocence glowing in her face. Even the grave man, aptly named Grimm, seemed kind in his way. Yosí slowly let out a breath.

Right.

“We were just searching for some food for the rest of our gro…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

THANK YOU AND YESSSSS! They really do need to.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

I’m so excited I’m struggling to get my fingers to write this.

Also, he kinda thinks about what he’s gone through, I don’t know if it would be icky or not, but just thought I’d mention it.

Yosí

Oh, he was a fool. Yosí let out a short laugh as he watched the latch swing… The broken patch swing…. In the wi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Interesting question, and I can definitely see where you’re coming from. I think we want to teach our readers something through all our characters, not the least being the villains. Because of this we often want our reader to sympathize with the villain a little, but this isn’t always what’s needed. It depends on what role your…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

So it seems to go, starting from the conversation on whether and how to add Yosí, like this:

Pg. 324

1. My intro RP for Yosí
2. Freedom’s RP for Leo  (which was super cute!)

Pg. 325

1. Godly’s RP for Paxton (also adorable; I love Paxton.)
2. my 2nd RP for Yosí

And that may or may not be right, considering RPs lik…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I think it’s either yours or @freedomwriter76 ‘s.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Ok, so I think Yosí kinda gets “found” by the good searching group. Then they would head as a whole back to the others, having pilfered provisions from the storeroom he’s in(unless that feels too convenient/isn’t what y’all had in mind.). Other than wonderful conversations, I don’t have much of an idea. XD

@everyone

Let’s see….

Alwin

His voice hung in the air for a moment before vanishing beneath the noise of the crowd. Alwin frowned and began to search the room for someone who wasn’t occupied by food or friends, someone who would hear him over the din.

His gaze fell on a small, white face framed by a crown of red gold hair. Her mouth pinched…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That’s okay, don’t worry. I understand.

Considering I literally don’t know how many conversations on here I’ve dropped out of in the middle, (but I know it’s more than one) I had better understand. XD

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

So excited!!

Yosí

In the moment it took for Yosí to understand what was happening he had already found his cudgel and a place of defense beside the window. Instinct had moved his feet before he knew what he did.

Now all he could do was wait and watch unblinking. His eyes flicked from the latch to the window. C…[Read more]

@felicity

You do? O.O *feels warm and fuzzy* Unfortunately, no, I didn’t make it up. It’s actually Old English.

I like your greeting phrase too!

@everyone @godlyfantasy12

I think I’ll add Alwin too. 🙂

…and once more Alwin managed to fiddle with my narrative voice. XD

Alwin

Strange things have happened to people. They’ve found hidden treasures in their basements, lost heirs in disguise as traitors, and sometimes even themselves in places they hadn’t been. Some of us have even become…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Wini is going to be, but I haven’t added her yet.  I’ll go ahead and do the real quick.

Winifrith

Her heart beat inside her ears, yet somehow managed to choke her as well. She pressed her back against the becurtained wall and let the fluttering folds fall over her. Hiding her away until she could think clearly.

Home was small.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That would be hilarious! I can see them now…

Vulka&Lynnieforever!!!! XD

Ah, just kidding.

By the way, I was told to tell you Koshka is thrilled. In fact, when you meet… somebody you might find her to be a lot like Lynn in personality. Also, it would be hilarious if Vulka married a shortie. (His father did.[which is where Z…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

This is pretty awesome. XD

1. Oldest OC

Um…………… Actually, I was going to say Cendrick, a main character from the first novel I set out to write (and made it to the third chapter.), But I just remembered one of the few vivid memories I have from my early early childhood. I was making a picture book during service at…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol, yes. XD

Godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Ok, I’ll go ahead and write an introductory POV. I’m playing with a narrative voice, by the way…

Yosí

Gentle rain tapped against the shutters like the echoes of passing dreams, shut out from wakened lands. Their far off call swelled in Yosí’s heart till he rested his head against the s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy

Yay! That sounds good. They can meet him while getting food (maybe he has found some?) and he can come back with them to meet N and Paxton.

Also, I’m thinking that one of the kids might ask about the brand, because adults usually try to ignore such things. He wouldn’t really mind, but it would open up some details…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

And yes, I’ve read through it. It’s so much fun!

Someday we might get together and publish it as “The Wild Wanderings of Our Lost Characters” or some other such title. I’m sure it’d be a best seller. XD

Actually, it’s been quite handy when on the off chance that I can’t quite get into the feel of my characters I can get on here…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yay! Yeah, I thought they might. They’re such darlings. (As for the brand… I’m not even sure what to think about it. It’s just so horrible really, but it’s just one of those things in my books that doesn’t want to lighten up.)

I love your characters and don’t mind a rant. (I rant about mine, after all. XD)

As for his name, I…[Read more]