Elishavet Elroi

@whalekeeper

Ok! I understand. Brain Blah happens to the best of us. I hope you feel better soon.

@liberty

Ok, critiques/comments to come later, but I was able to sit down and read through it for now. I love it! I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those, but…[Read more]

@liberty

Oh, I just saw this and decided to investigate. XD (Now I really wish I checked my notifications more often. Lol) Sorry it took me so long. And I won’t be able to read through it until later today or tomorrow. 😢 Still, so excited!

Liberty’s Rangers story!!

@loopylin

XD Me too.

I like science well enough. I really liked Geology and Radiology. (Lots of elements causing drama together.) Hence my choice of lecture. XD

I can think up ideas for the expirement… Identifying minerals by the color of their rubbings, whether they glow in the dark, how they break, how hard they are, and if they fiz when a…[Read more]

@loopylin

Lol. Yeah…

XD If we get someone to twit him about the right thing, something would blow…

He’s usually a bit shy: a bit excited to meet people, but more than a bit uncomfortable with all the nuances he picks up on in situations. (Or thinks he does. Sepf-focused/self-conscious issues there) He’s used to getting picked on and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Just opened this thread to read this:

“Well… I respect it because it’s a god, but I don’t have to like it. And it tries not to like me either because that would go against its morals. It doesn’t just talk, it preaches.”

😂 I have no words. Just goofy, suppressed laughter noises. XD Qhivzim sounds like my sister’s cat if they only l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin

I am still sorely tempted to have my quiet guy haul off on someone. This is bad. His character development is at stake.

Viktor

“Any good? At science?” Viktor lifted one shoulder in a half shrug. “Ja, I guess so. I can remember things, I just…”

The pencil he had pulled back out waved aimlessly about as he searched for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Ehhhhh. Needlessss… *shudder* 😉 I hope it well well!

@loopylin

Wow. I just wrote an RP and it got completely out of hand. I haven’t had Viktor yelling at anyone in a while, but I just found a trigger. XD It’s a bit excessive for the moment though, so I’ll edit to what I was originally intending before I send it in.

His poor…[Read more]

@loopylin

And that is a question I had to scroll pretty far back to answer.

Do we wait for Hugo, @whakekeeper ?

@loopylin

AHa! That works… I lost my place too…

Now let’s see if I can get back into my charrie’s head.

Viktor

Lab partners. Right.

Viktor shuffled his notes into his textbook as slowly as he could, making sure each page was smooth and even. His old habit to duck his head out of friendships cut again. A quick glance at Lois didn’t help.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Aw, Lucille… I like Lucille.

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it have an important part in the plot/worldbuilding?

Those other kids are bullies. 😠 The struggle of wills in the fight was really good though. I liked how you focus on her not throwi…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.

Code key: nuanced syntax.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh Sarah. Sorry I didn’t see your request earlier. Know I’m praying too! Believing God will be with you in the middle of the stresses.

@r-m-archer

It is Google docs….. I’ll have to try using Word as a go-between. It doesn’t mess anything else up, but it’s like Scrivener thinks my pasted sections are all links.

@loopylin

Me too, Felicity. Me too. XD

Three refugees find out their adoption was fraud and set out to destroy the government with the help of an oversized bird and a few underpaid zealots.

@whalekeeper

This is fantastic. Fantastic. It summoned me from my piano quicker than Susan’s horn.

Now I’ve gotta make one. XD This’ll take a bit.