Elfwing

@elfwing I mean, I used to read bad books too lol. And then I started writing, and I didn’t read anything but manga and classics, so when I finally went around to reading other stuff again, I was more like, “what is this thing I’m reading.” I guess writing has trained me to look for mistakes more, and also one of my sister’s hobbies is roasting…[Read more]

@elfwing Hahaha XD I’m sure you will!! Just stick with it! I made the mistake of publishing too soon and not building up an awaiting audience first ::::)

I do! I published Era of Shadows on amazon a couple years ago. It’s a medieval Fantasy retelling of Alice in Wonderland, based on the Red Queen’s perspective.

Recently (July) I published The…[Read more]

@elfwing Nope… that’s never happened to me before! XD I have a tendency to slam down my book and yell at it whenever there are problems. XD

@elfwing Oh, for me, I’m the opposite. Problems always stick out to me, but usually I stay quiet about them because I feel like they aren’t something that the writer can change easily (like style, the overall plot, etc.) If it’s typos I will though.

@elfwing i could definitely help with that!  I love working with descriptions.

@elfwing alright!  I might be able to help with prose, but I’m not very good at plotting.  I might be able to critique small sections at a time, and just give you general writing advice 🙂

@elfwing ooh i see.  I personally don’t have that problem, but there might be someone else who does 🙂

It’s only if you want to.  I don’t want you to feel pressured or anything. It’s something that I’ve been considering recently, just for people in general.  I have to warn you, though, I might not be able to dedicate a lot of time because of sc…[Read more]

@elfwing  I don’t know if this is what you’re asking, but I would be up for being a beta reader if you need something critiqued, or just giving you advice 🙂

You guys are awesome! I can’t believe how quickly y’all replied to my post. You certainly know how to make a newcomer (or oldcomer XD) feel welcome!! Sorry that I took so long to respond! I wanted to get all the replies done at once.

@daisy-torres

Hi!! Ooh, yeah we are pretty close! To be honest, my type has fluctuated but I mainly stay ENFP-T…[Read more]

Ugh, the forum balrog ate my reply when I tried to edit it, so reposting.

I would like to pitch in with a few things here.

Do not let all of your characters meet each other in the same room. Only three out of more than twenty characters speak English, and like at least ten of them haven’t even SEEN the real world before. Thus, this will result…[Read more]

Oh man. I would like to pitch in with a few things here.

Do not let all of your characters meet each other in the same room. Only three out of more than twenty characters speak English, and like at least ten of them haven’t even SEEN the real world before. Thus, this will result in:

– All characters out of The Travelers’ Caravan being amazed at…[Read more]

@elfwing Black clothing and whipped cream canisters? That I’ll have to try!

@sparrowhawke

Hey! Welcome to KP! I’m honoured to be the very first to welcome you to the Kingdom. You’re going to love it here! My name’s Grace, though most round here call me Kads. 😛 Hey, fellow high fantasy writer over here! *holds out hand for a high five* What’s your current work(s) in progress about?

I’m gonna contrast you over here–I’m…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216 @elfwing @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @gracie-j and to everyone who read the first installment:

I just wanted to thank every one of you again for all your feedback and comments, they genuinely are priceless to me and have been immensely helpful more than you’ll ever know. Every time I saw a response, my whole day was made…[Read more]

@elfwing

That’s alright 🙂 I’m super happy that you liked it!!!! 😀 😀

@elfwing

I loved where Analyce said, “why doesn’t he just kiss her already?” XD That was awesome and I was with her on that 100% XD And where Kaunon said, “oh no! Quite nice is it?” And for some reason, the part where Ayerna noticed he looked twenty instead of nearly seventeen. Okay, this is not very helpful, I know, I know. I just had to tell y…[Read more]

@elfwing

This made me laugh so hard XD THIS IS HILARIOUS!! I absolutely love it, (is this from personal experience? XD ). I’ll have to refer to this list if I ever bring characters from my fantasy stories, (I have a feeling number nine and five would be all too true with them *shudders*). Overall, this is genius! I love this humor and these k…[Read more]