Elfwing

so dramatic *smacks forehead

@keilah-h @gracie-j @abigail-m @issawriter7 @godlyfantasy21 @other-people-who-want-to

here’s my last one from yesterday!

Then he blinked in shock as Violet’s fist shot out like a viper and hit the man square in the throat; he let out a cry of pain, and released his grip on her neck.

@seekjustice

I admit that I laughed out loud reading those and I imagine the first one has to do with the results of said werewolf abilities?

@gracie-j Thanks so so so much!!! I look forward to it 🙂

@gracie-j yes pleassssssse!! XD

@maryg3

thanks!

yeah, it’s sad when people walk away. It’s something I challenge myself never to do and I pray to God I never will.

yes, I hope to start writing it soon 🙂

Well, I have Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea demanding my attention, so see ya around! 😉 🙂 btw if you haven’t read it I recommend it, it’s a really cool book (and…[Read more]

@gracie-j

LOL yeah! I only read your first book but it was a jolly good read and I hope to read more in the future 😉

*sighs * “three’s a crowd and four’s a mob” as I say. I mean, that’s in reference to children interacting and playing, but it applies to most people and friendships in my experience. Have you ever tried to have a conversation…[Read more]

@joy-Caroline

haha thanks! The characters sound really cool! Good job developing them!! 😊

@issawriter7

haha I love yours! Totally fits her character!

I like how you say that you don’t know much about the MC; that’s what I do as well; they develop as they go along and I usually figure them out as the reader does. XD

@joy-caroline

ok, my summary of what you described:

Temira’s trust is hard to win so when she loves someone she’s fiercely protective. In this case, I’d assume she overprotects Reuben and doesn’t allow him to do things that could get him even a little bit hurt because of being hurt herself. Because of her loyalty, she is so careful to keep him…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting lol thanks!

@nova21 Hahahahaha cinnamon rolls! That’s great! XD

@gracie-j

you’re welcome!! 🙂

I totally understand what you mean; I do that so often, which is why it’s lovely to have several very different people in my book so one can ramble, one play devil’s advocate, and the other one, who’s the quiet rough one, can end any stupidity happening in the disagreement. XD

@nova21

haha, thanks! I guess she’s based on yours truly *bows, then hesitates, evaluates character, and wonders if I actually paid myself a compliment or not… *

@gracie-j

First of all… I LOVE the name Keaton! second, his dialogue seems to fit. I suppose just keep his lines short, don’t have him using too many please n’ thank you’s and keep…[Read more]

@nova21

You’re welcome! 🙂 the story sounds so intriguing, and I’m sure it’ll be epic, whatever you decide!

@writerlexi1216

Been there. A lot.

I agree with all these fine folks!

I will break up my advice:

1: I’d say don’t try too hard on things. If you’re finding it hard, write what you can, and don’t push so hard you’re on the edge of tears (personal admonishment for myself right now XD), but as Elizabeth said, refill!!! I love writing, but at…[Read more]

@maryg3

Thank you! it took me a year and a half to decide! lol

Well, I must say my inspiration was partly from a Griffin clan keychain pendant I was given two years ago. One side of my family two generations back has that last name. 🙂 That triggered the story being started as well as the story of the MC (main character), but the actual world…[Read more]

@will_starke

sorry, your tag didn’t go through the first time

@nova21

haha!! Great idea!! And I’d say your MCs dialogue fits.

My sci fi book MC is shy in big groups but stubborn and has her opinions and likes to bug her brother

her first three lines in the story:

(Omits action) Alden, stop it! I hit in here five minutes ago!”

(Omits action) “Good morning. I didn’t burn the house down so that’s encouragi…

[Read more]