Elanor

@savannah_grace2009

Everyone above gave such great advice that I dont really have much to add. I sometimes worry about things too, that my book is to dark and I worry that my style changes throughout the WIP. I also doubt myself, but I realized that I shouldn’t be, you are the only one who can tell the story you are telling. It may be hard to…[Read more]

@everyone

The scene above is a little old, but I felt like I had to finish off the last part that I forgot to do, so just continue with the journey were doing now 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry this is a little late! (Ignore all mistakes I’m writing this fast, lol! )

Hugo

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“I’m sorry,” Ottoline laughed a little, “All I do is cry,” she smiled wryly. Hugo smiled at her and held her hand tighter.

A man sat down next to Ottoline, “I don’t think we’ve met,” he addressed Hugo, sticking out his hand. “I’m Ma…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Ive always used Google docs, sometimes they do get laggy but you just have to be a bit patient *Heres me over here pounding the keys and yelling at the computer while all my family is looking at me like I’m insane* XD  But doc works great! The one with my WIP on is currently 138 pages and it works just fine, Id say about 95% of the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

🤣 Eloy and Cass are the perfect brothers! Please tag me if you write/post more!

@savannah_grace2009

The ones Rae gave you are really good! Have you written the next chapter yet? (I want to see how this ends 🙂 )

@savannah_grace2009

 Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)

Lol! Thank you!!

In this scene they are trying to break into a giant facility to save their family’s. Hugo being his annoying self, lol!

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“Now are you ready?” Hugo asked impatiently, testing the strength of the handcuffs.

She hesitated, “Yes, I think we are.”

“Kiss for motivation?”

“In your dreams Walton.”

She roughly grabbed Hugo by the neck of his…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Heres one scene! (ignore all the mistakes) It takes place just as they are about to get to the capital, Bermill.

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He turned to leave, just as the chair slid out from under Vikii, she shrieked and Hugo spun back towards her and caught her in his arms. “Hey, not too bad, huh?” he smiled, “Got better reflexes than you t…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oooooh! Thank you!!!!! She looks perfect!!! I especially like how you drew the sunflower! Thank you so much for taking the time to do it!!

@savannah_grace2009

Maybe….😏 Ill find some later!

@savannah_grace2009

AHHHHH!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Awww! I love it!

@rae

Oh, sorry. Just edit that out 🙂

@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Hugo 

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Ottoline wasn’t to mad, thats good. As a matter of fact she seemed relived. Hugo gingerly touched his hair and was relived to find that it was still on his head, his arm hair though, was singed badly.

He sat up and took a few more deep breaths, and coughed up a bit of smoke. He was lucky to be…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh! I love it! Cant wait for the second chapter!

His blonde hair shone in the sun, his blue eyes matched the sky overhead. And me, being twelve, wondered if he was the one.

I cringe, remembering my old feelings. Eww. Gross. Not Sake.

I was one weird twelve year old, that was for sure.

Lol!!! This is great XD

@savannah_grace2009

HUGO!!!! WHY???????????????????? YOU LEFT OTTOLINE!!!!!!

Lol! Hugo is overly confident.

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Hugo

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He began to choke. This was the end. He was sure of it.

Darkness flickered past his eyes. “No!” he didnt want to die… He wanted to say goodbye to Ottoline and tell her how much she meant to him…

“Cough!…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hugo

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“Hugo!”

He ran.

“Hugo!”

He continued to run.

The heat of the flames burned his face, but he still ran.

“This is my punishment,” He thought, darting into a small gap into the castle. There were more flames than he imagined. They were devouring the wood and blocking all the other exits.

It was to late to…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hugo

He found Ottoline. She was crawling towards him and coughing from all the smoke. His eyes began to water from the smoke, but he managed to see her outline and reach her

“It’s okay, I’ve got you…” He told her in a comforting tone, dropping to his knees “Your safe… Actually your not, but we will be!”

“We have to get Ma…[Read more]