@elanor
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Elanor replied to the topic Cheesy or not? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 9 months ago
No problem!
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Elanor replied to the topic âš” The Great Word Winding Tournament âš” in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
Sadly I have had little to no time to think up a poem and even less inspiration. But I repeat the sentiments of @lewilliams above ⬆️ that I would be excited about a contest like this if you happen to be hosting another in the future. 😁
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Elanor replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
An ignorant Canadian such as I shall have to google it. *leaves and googles then returns* Those are some cool looking trees! They look like trees that have fern foliage and mini berries. Â The poem is now perfectly clear. 😜
It’s awesome when one can write down poetry right in the moment and in the environment it comes from.
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Elanor replied to the topic Cheesy or not? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 9 months ago
Pretty much what Kathleen said. I think if it’s done right any trope can become enjoyable or even awesome.
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Elanor replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
The poem sounds really cool. The pictures painted with the metaphors of the trees are cool.
Although while reading about the peppercorn trees it appears almost abstract. Like I can’t quite picture what your painting because I’m not sure what peppercorn trees are supposed to look like lol
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Elanor replied to the topic âš” The Great Word Winding Tournament âš” in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
Well well! This sounds very exciting.
What with my schedule I’ll see if I can get to writing.
Alas I have many woes upon me
For I know not much of the great bandicoot
But I shall try to research enough for some poetry
Well ta ta for now. The game is afoot!
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Elanor replied to the topic Trapped in Library of the Kingdom of Pen — Author RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I don’t know how to do role play and don’t think I have the time. Thanks for including me though.
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Elanor replied to the topic To Visit a King in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Thank you. 😊
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Elanor replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
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Elanor replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Cool! It’s not my best but here you are. 🙂
Fall
Fall’s my favourite over all other seasons
And for that, there’s several simple reasons.
The air smells so cold and crisp.
The wind’s whispers drive leaves into drifts
I can wear cozy sweaters without getting hot
A book and mug of black tea just hit the spot.
With school…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
So sweet! Nailed it.
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Elanor replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
@charityanne
Love it!I wrote a poem about Autumn a little while back. Do you want to read it?
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Elanor replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 1 year, 10 months ago
Yes. The major con is the lack of sleep one gets when they’re brainstorming to write something 😆
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Elanor started the topic To Visit a King in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
So here’s one I’ve only started then got stumped on.
What do y’all think?
In a small shepherd’s village
In a humble blessed cottage
A carpenter’s tools grind
As Joseph works to provide.
A mother’s melody rings
As Mary works and sings.
I hear a toddler’s squeak
As Jesus attempts to walk.
On a journey of many leagues
Approa…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 1 year, 10 months ago
I was just scrolling and this poem of yours Daisy and I love it.
Is it just me or does the poetry that comes at night the most powerful? The sort that repeats in your head until you HAVE to write it down for fear of it keeping you up all night.
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Elanor replied to the topic Say and think in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
*Sobs*
Oh my goodness. I sooo relate to this poem. Â I struggle ridiculously to start conversations with people. ESPecially the people I want to talk to the most. -
Charityanne and Elanor are now friends 1 year, 10 months ago
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Elanor replied to the topic Daydream in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Love this!
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Elanor replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
The closest thing to dance I’ve done is ballet. I was in a ballet program when I was 4-5 and remember enjoying that.
I don’t have a particular rhyme pattern either although I nearly always have one. I’ve only ever written one completely free verse poem with no rhyme or reason and one which has heavy alliteration about atoms. Lol
Oh will do. I…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
Hello! I’m known as Elanor round here! I’m a Jesus loving Canadian homeschool graduate (18) who listens to wayy to much music, keeps herself ridiculously busy with her full time job, home life, and volunteering with several church ministries every week, and spends what little time she has left reading or on Goodreads. Thus I’ve been…[Read more]
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