E. M. Trepke

@e-m-trepke

I think Riker saved him? And as for a dog whistle…um…does a perfect imitation of a wolf howl work?

So I think it’s @elishavet-pidyon’s turn?? Maybe? 😂 also any ideas yall I’m what to do next in the fight? I doubt Ocran’s the type to surrender…….

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @e-m-trepke @koshka

@e-m-trepke ahh this is getting fun! @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Corvina

What a mess…

Corvina stared at the chaos as Vesper lunged straight into it, sprouting curious looks from everyone around.

None knew if he was friend or foe, but seeing as he was obviously attacking the hounds and soldiers…most seemed to qui…[Read more]

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Corvina

Agh!

Vesper still held his arm in front of her. In truth…the reason they’d stopped was a shriek sounding from down the hall…

And…while it did send a small shudder down Corvina’s spine…especially as it sounded so…young, her main focus was how it seemed to affect the group she was watching.

They’d taken off, and she’d b…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke

I like your story idea!

Thanks!😀

Is there anything wrong with the culture apart from the separation of East and West?

Well they absolutely hate each other 🤣 kinda a problem. The best I can explain it is like this: just using American politics for example (this is not set in America, just an example.) Imagine democrats and republicans…[Read more]

@Whalekeeper

I agree with @e-m-trepke that it’s important for your MCs to have clear motivations.

Ok, thanks that really helps. I need to figure that out.

There’s this other Youtube writer called Abbie Emmons. I highly recommend binge-watching her videos. They’re super fun to watch! She emphasizes character development and teaches you how to ap…

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Corvina

This guy was still asking questions…

Corvina frowned. He just wasn’t going to leave well enough alone was he?

“Just leave him.”

Hmm…it was tempting…

Instead, she turned to face him, narrowing her eyes. “I already told you. He knows someone important to me. Someone I need to find. That’s all.”

 “L…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke understandable! Also unless it fits ur story u don’t really have to kill of anyone 😊

@e-m-trepke OOOF…. Low key forgot about that being in here…sorry for ur loss!! But yeaaaaa…..

I agree with @e-m-trepke that it’s important for your MCs to have clear motivations. There’s this other Youtube writer called Abbie Emmons. I highly recommend binge-watching her videos. They’re super fun to watch! She emphasizes character development and teaches you how to apply it to every plot device on the planet. I’ve never looked at plot the…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke here it is!!

@e-m-trepke Ohhhh that makes sense. Okay.

@elishavet-pidyon whoever or whatever the fly is…U GO FLY!!! XD!!!

also!!! @e-m-trepke AHH!! Ok so there is a forum…called the Spoiler Chat…or something like that…XD

and if u head over there (I’ll try to find it and tag u) it tells u how the two are connected. It is a huge spoiler in my series buuuut as long as u don’t care I don’t mind…[Read more]

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Corvina

“… of a fish.”

Corvina raised her eyebrows, stopping misstep. Vesper blushed slightly, palming his face.

Corvina pursed her lips. “Well, okay then.” She rolled her eyes, continuing on her way.

@e-m-trepke OH MY GOSH I LUV HIM!!!! AHHHHH!!! HE’S KINDA LIKE NOVEMBER! I’ll RP tomorrow btw! Night y’all!

@e-m-trepke man I’m loving this dynamic!!!

Corvina

A flicker of a smile flashed on her face, but she quickly diffused it.

“Okay.” She pushed her tongue to the side of her cheek, trying to decide how much information to give.

How to…manipulate her words so as not to reveal too much…yet still please the young man.

Lies usually worked well. She’…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke AH this really is so much fun! This dynamic is great for Corvina! especially because you mentioned your guy isn’t actually a bad guy but he thinks he is due to misbeliefs and my gal is an antagonist (and (SPOILER)   will be redeemed in the end)

Corvina

Aaaaand he already broke rule number one.

Of course…

Pretty sure he was…[Read more]

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Corvina

“…From yourself.”

Corvina stiffened, fists clenching until nails dug into skin.

Her blood ran cold with anger and she glared, but the young man stood his ground. Had to respect him for that…

But…the audacity!

Protect her?

From herself?!

What did that even mean…?

She nearly snarled, the voice in her mind growling, be…[Read more]

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Corvina

The boy had left.

Run off.

Something had upset him. Yelling, trauma….

Corvina clenched her fists, remembering the curly-haired boy’s face vividly.

Too vividly.

It was a look she knew well.

A look she wore well.

A look that spoke of a childhood misspent. A childhood filled with brokenness and…and pain.

Maybe not exactl…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @e-m-trepke @koshka anyone wanna RP? Don’t think I missed any tags….