E. M. Trepke

Sofia

“Let’s stop and think this through.” Sofia spoke aloud, finding comfort in the familiarity of her voice against the almost deathlike silence. Like Aer.

“Don’t think of that,” she gasped, struggling to push away the storm of emotions that burst inside her. She staggered a few steps drunkenly, then paused to lean against the wall. “Don’t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

THAT DID, thank you. I assume you just google pics and randomly drag from the internet…?

YES! I like that doesn’t have to ‘fit’ attitude, too! (tho probably less so. XD) I could spend SOO long making aesthetics for my characters, but I really shouldn’t, heh. XD If I get in a mood, though, I will. (I have a horrible fashion…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

ok, oh, those are all wow, and I think that Luna’s is my favorite, so far. She vibes with me the most.

Also, I have to ask: how hard and how long do you have to look to get all the awesome and perfect pictures you use??

@e-m-trepke

He has not; because of what he is, killing is a very serious thing for him and he has to have a very good reason for it (like, very very good reason and something possibly world-destroying will happen if the person isn’t killed) so he’s never killed before. Which, with that, it’s also really essential for him to have completely…[Read more]

@lydia-s, that is funny! It really fits my girl, though! (She’s from HofE, if you saw my post about my WIPs. 😉 )

@lydia-s

Well then! I feel like I’ve done something even more awesome, heh!

(ok, now let’s try again and see if I can get something else to work)

( @godlyfantasy12 ) This is for a character who I love/hate. He is related to the previous character I posted about, and is a total dishrag of a father and husband.

To briefly sum up his story: he went to sea and made his fortune so he could marry his love, then left without…[Read more]

@madelyn

We really do. 😆 I bet its because we either have long and slightly confusing names or names we don’t want to completely reveal (as is in my case). Besides, who wants to say the entire title of a book when you can just say the acronym?

@godlyfantasy12 cool Lina beans!

Sure! I was planning on doing a bit with her anyway, so that works for me!

(so I don’t have to be naming them with vague titles anymore:)

My oldest WIP that I’m writing with a friend, I refer to as: RotH

My other oldest WIP that I’m writing by myself, I refer to as: HofE

My newest WIP, the one I’ve probably mentioned most, about the mentor who dies, I’ll refer to as: FP,WS

Other smaller projects I will still vaguely…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Zoe

“Huh, well…” Corvina cleared her throat. “Nice shift, kid.” She stepped past and then gestured towards the door in front of them with her head. “Think you can smell for any other humans?”

Yes! Yes! Zoe bounced to it, sniffing the frame and floor, for any scent that humans leave behind. She caught a trail, one person, and w…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I am constructing and language and use Latin as a base for some of the processes. I learned latin using a set of books called Henle (the author of the books) and it was difficult, but very good to learn (with my grandma who’s taught it for years and thus able to answer many questions about it) and it was a pretty thorough course.…[Read more]

@r-m-archer

Thank you so much for the advice! I might try that for different cultures/nations in one world! (I have three major ones, atm.) I have (*counts*) five different languages, besides the universal one (I think) and a similar amount of writing systems (based on the same basic runes, just different styles) and those come together with the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Zoe

Corvina drew a breath, eyeing Zoe like she had done something wrong.

“Look,” she said, her voice soft like when Malcolm coaxed her before demanding something from her. “I’m not ‘ordering’ you to do anything. I’m just…letting you tag along, okay? That’s it.” Corvina spoke cooly, almost slyly, like there was a hidden trick.…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Thank you!! ☺️ It is probably the scene I’ve written that I’m most proud of, right now, because it feels so natural when I’m reading it and it came so easily. (I had another scene, long ago, but ALAS I lost it to accursed technology (which I’m still bitter about because there was a ton more I lost with it).) It seems like near…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke

I have given some thought to that idea, but as of yet, I do not know how Anti will be affected, mentally or anything. Aside from being ostracized completely from his group of gifted and all society, I am not sure how he will respond. I think he will continue to rationalize his actions, at least for a while, but when it comes time for…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 and THAT is another reason why I must have my MC die: so I can use this scene. (But I was already planning on having him die, anyway, because that was the beginning idea of this WIP: to write a story from a mentor’s pov and still have him die.) ANYWAY… Thank you!!!

@koshka

(I know!) You’re welcome.

Thank you! I hope that it will still be after I butcher it in the writing process. XD But, that is what the other drafts after the first one are for. Heh.

@godlyfantasy12

Imma just share the only scene I’ve actually written for that WIP I’ve talked about and asked for some help with. So, here ye go, and lemme know what you think!!

The phoenix rose from ashes of his body, drawing all heat to itself, growing larger as it rose into the sky, leaving behind icy stillness.

Stoke watched from the hil…

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