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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Gotcha.
It would be interesting if he joined Corvina and the Hydra agents (Viola and Hans?) (for certain reasons). Btw, what have those three been up to lately? -
ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Hullo everyone!
I think I’m going to pull out Hesh and throw in a different character who needs a bit of development. Here are his specs:Name: Vesper
Appearance: tallish, silvery eyes, pale hair
Background: heir to the throne of Ulmire, squire to a knight of Eudor… I’ll reveal more in his POVs.
mwahaha! 😏Now here’s Vesper:
Vesper rubbed…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic A Blurb…and…some help brainstorming? Thoughts? in the forum Fantasy 4 years ago
I love your WIP idea! Hope is a thing long-missing in the dystopian genre, and I’m glad you’re introducing it! Your characters sound interesting!
My reader brain is intrigued…This hurricane I’m hearing about… is it the one that reached as far North as Nova Scotia?
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ET replied to the topic A scene I NEVER saw coming…… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Sorry for the late feedback, but WOW. I know next to nothing about these characters, but I could feel their grief like a punch in the gut. Very effective. Good job! 👍
I haven’t yet had to write the death of any of my MCs, but when I do I think I will need a tissue fort too.
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ET replied to the topic What do you love most about your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years ago
Sadly, my WIP has fallen by the wayside for a few months, but I have recently remembered how much I love my world. Even though I am still in the developmental stage of my WIP, I love how my world and characters are growing. My world started as a couple seeds, but now it is becoming a garden. I am excited to see where it goes. 🙂
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Absolutely! By the way, where were we? It’s been a while…
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I’m totally up for getting the rp rolling again! However, I might not make very timely responses… I have a job and weekends are booked… but I will try to write whenever I can. Hesh needs it.
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Hesh
His stomach sickened; his face blanched. This zoo of… living statues reeked of magic. He fixed his gaze on a spiked and scaly creature with glacial eyes. “What is that thing?” He shuddered.
Feather glanced over. “That would be an Icehunter.” she said. “They’re from various worlds in my universe, and c…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Hesh
As the mournful howl reverberated through the castle, a chill danced up Hesh’s spine.
“I think this is it.” Feather gestured to a nearby door. “Hesh, Dark Player, can either of you get it open?”
Hesh nodded. “Absolutely.” He retrieved his lock-picking kit from his boot once again and set to work. How man…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Hesh
Hesh could see the same bewilderment that had once plagued him reflected on this boy’s– Dark Player’s– face. He saw Dark Player’s eye narrow in distrust. That was mutual. Hesh didn’t trust him any farther than… never mind. He didn’t trust this ‘Dark Player’ at all. It was clear that Hesh wasn’t the only one…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Hesh
A young man— a boy really— tumbled into the passage through a window. Like Hesh, the boy wore an eye patch.
Kent growled, Feather’s eyes widened, and Rinzler confronted the character.“Who are you?” Rinzler demanded.
The boy looked wary and weary, ready collapse from lack of water. Hesh handed him his waterskin. “Here, drink this.”
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ET replied to the topic Hello! I thought I should probably introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Hello, Koshka!
I hope you get a violin soon! I completely understand your position… my flute-playing is on hold until I buy a new flute.
I do love archery too! I’ve always wanted Susan’s quiver. Archery is great because I actually know how to do it (and own a bow), so it is a bit more attainable than sword fighting.
I have been reading a lot o…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Hello! I thought I should probably introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Why, hello there, @power.
Favourite sword? How can one decide?
Favourite sci-fi/fantasy books? How can one decide that either? Ok… let’s see. I will write a list of some that I have read.
The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, most of the Silmarillion, 5 books of The Wheel of Time, almost all of the Shannara books, The Chronicles of Narnia, The…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Hesh
His head pounded as if all the forces of Merscwarn had waged battle in his skull. Ow. He sat up, leaned against a cold damp wall, and breathed. Slowly his head-fog began to clear. Feather and Rinzler had already regained consciousness and were fiddling with the lock of the chamber’s door.
Since someone had gone through al…[Read more]
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ET started the topic Hello! I thought I should probably introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Hello! My name is Evelyn and I am new here. I have been posting on the forum, but I thought I should probably introduce myself. I will do so by listing random facts.
I love dogs. I think swords are awesome. I play the flute. I’m learning the organ. I LOVE writing! I read. A LOT. Fantasy is my jam. Also sci-fi. Sometimes I get crazy ideas from my…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Hesh
Hesh pondered what Feather had told him. “So starships are like airships that can fly between worlds? And scientists experiment on people? Your world is many worlds?” All these new ideas were making his head spin. He promised to himself to never let any of this past his mouth once he got back home— if he got back home.…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Hesh
The relief of breathing fresh air once again came like a breath of fresh air. They must have had taken a wrong turn though, because instead of entering the guardhouse, they came out of the passage in a small courtyard overgrown with rose vines. He gazed up at the sky. A few distant clouds skittered across the sky like a…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Hesh
Hesh led the way back up the dim passage. With every step away from that door, he felt his heart grow a little lighter.
He could tell that Rinzler was still suspicious of him, but now mad as well for Hesh’s introduction of them to the cat. Hesh could handle Rinzler. In this place, they were going to need all the allies t…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
(Power, is Kent a leopard?)
Hesh
Hesh stepped back as a lithe form leaped, roaring, from the depthless darkness. “Light!” the creature… yelled? “Wonderful light!” The creature looked like a large, spotted cat, but spoke with the voice of a human. This day was only getting more bizarre.
Hesh eyed the cat warily, not sure whet…[Read more]
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