Snapper

Okay. I am admittedly new here (the group, as well as KP almost as much).

I wish I could say with enthusiasm that I will truly love and enjoy all of the forums and such. Sadly, that isn’t possible. I get confused pretty easily much of the time. And forums/chat rooms tend to move so fast. Also, is there an alert or something about when I receive a…[Read more]

@seekjustice This is gonna be good! I also requested access. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Alright-y then! Here’s part 2. It’s a bit longer than part 1. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xt0Mg5mn3HJW2aIZvbheF66fFbkISe567zs-KRVw7N0/edit?usp=sharing

*sighs*

I hate to say it, but I think your friend was right.

It’s not a bad thing, necessarily. The chapter introduced the family dynamic, and introduces a few things that will (obviously) come into play later in the story, but it doesn’t have a whole lot of oomph–by which I mean, something that draws the reader into the story. There’s…[Read more]

@seekjustice I just finished watching ATOTC 1958.  I am weeping, comfort me!  I am thankful it is the first two chapters of your novel you have given us, rather than the last, for I could never bear it.

@skredder I’m ready for it any time you’re ready to give it  😉

@seekjustice Yay! I can’t wait to read it! I requested access 🙂

@that_writer_girl_99 By all means, read away! 🙂

Sorry about the POV issue. I can’t seem to stay in one head. I will fix that when I edit the story. It’s supposed to be Casse’s POV.

@seekjustice This Friday? (Wednesday for me, right?) Okay, I’ll be praying for you!

@warrenluther04 That’s great!  I prayed for you several times yesterday, and was very happy to read your message in my email. 🙂  Goodbye, see you soon!

Hi! I popped in and read this too, just ’cause I was curious. Hope that’s okay.

Overall, it’s really good so far! I’m just a bit confused as to whose POV you’re using to tell the story? At times, it seems as if it’s being narrated by someone altogether different from the characters in the scene, which is kind of disorienting.

Other than that,…[Read more]

@leumeister You compose?  That’s cool!  My brother is a classical style composer.  Well, if you’d like to send me those links I’ll listen to them, but I’ll warn you that they probably will not have a chance at changing my preferences. 🙂  Sorry.  So if you, as the composer, don’t want to have a possibility of someone disliking them, you prob…[Read more]

Hey @valtmy, I’d also like to point out that google docs does have a feature you can set the doc to that allows you to pick and choose who has access to your doc based on their email, so if you wanted to do it that way, you could.

@valtmy Usually people on here are really nice about it if you just let them know you only want a specific few people on the document.  You might get a few random views of people reading it, but they won’t comment unless you want them to.  People always ask me for permission before commenting on my documents, and I do the same for others.  So if…[Read more]

@dekreel Sorry, I thought you’d be able to see that I edited the document, since I added the Bobert section to the main character list, so I didn’t inform you of the fact.  Yes, I can edit the document.  I didn’t answer before because I’m not on KP on Sundays. 😉  So if you ever need me to edit after you, just let me know, as long as it’s not on Sunday.

@ariel-ashira Yes, I did.

@dekreel. You are a chosen one!  Congratulations!

@skredder Did you draw that?

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice

When y’all are ready for part 2 let me know, and I can have it up rather quickly. 🙂

@valtmy You can public message a few people and then share the doc directly with them.