@devastate-lasting
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Ooh, nice!! I’ll be on the lookout then!! 😉
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I feel that! Ooo, I love jogging too!! Well, hang in there and if you need to, just put the scene outline in brackets and move on (e.g. [#1 wants to attack and #2 wants to stay put; they argue, but #1 wins eventually]).
Wow!! I’m impressed!! Great job, keep it up!!!
Nice!! I like that…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Dang, ten pages???? You go, girl!!!! *applaudes* And good luck on the short story contest!
Hey, I’m glad to hear you’ll be finished your first draft soon! I have total faith in you!! *pumps fist in the air* Good luck!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
@devastate-lasting No problem!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
@devastate-lasting Thank you so much!!
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rBAut0ZPBW1GiJ7QXjwNkgFf4EeE3pEt73XakZUKIR0/edit?usp=drivesdk
Guys, this is it 😱 The fifth chapter. I might upload more to my home page so I don’t bog anything down on the novel critique forum, so if you want me to tag you for updates, just let me know! I don’t want to bug anyone 💕 Thank you all again!! I have…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
@devastate-lasting Yay!! Take your time though <3
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Thank you so much! 🙂
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Those are AWESOME lines!
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g_c_al replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
That’s quite the variety! 😄
I’ve always wanted to learn the guitar, but I just haven’t had a chance. How about you? -
Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-vbhn_QpzMJ_xlGO1Sb6epYzGJIB0HY55BwPVctj3Dk/edit?usp=drivesdk
@anyone-who-wants-to @nova21 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j
After this I’m planning on putting up one more chapter. Thank you to everyone who stuck with me on this!! I’m so grateful to y’all!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
Thank y’all so much, @nova21 @devastate-lasting!! If y’all ever need the favor returned, just let me know <3
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Oooh, nice!! Three cheers to you for getting some progress made!! Yikes, homework… yeah, I feel for you there ;-; I’m procrastinating my algebra homework for as long as possible… *sigh*
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g_c_al replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@devastate-lasting
Oh! I love music! Ed Sheeran, 5SOS, and Dan+Shay are some of my favorites, but I listen to a lot of different genres. When I put my music on shuffle, it can be a bit odd.How about you?
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
That’s neat! (Not about the plotting shambles). Yikes, I feel for you there. Plotting can be… difficult, so I wish you luck. And hey, I’d be honored to read your work! I think your ideas sound super gripping. I’ll be on the lookout for the short stories, then! 🙂 And no problem!
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g_c_al replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
Hi Linyang! It’s nice to meet you!
My favorite authors are Rick Riordan and Jenny Han, and my favorite books are The Prisoner of Azkaban and The Lightning Thief. My favorite movies are Raiders, Ghostbusters(’84), and the Pirates of the Caribbean series.  Some of my hobbies are reading and writing, baking, watercolor, and hik…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Dude, these are AWESOME!!! And those character names are 10/10. I’d love to read some of your writing sometime! 🙂 Which WIP do these quotes come from??
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Lucy Israel replied to the topic Hey! I am new, and love fantasy fiction, in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
hey!
I have the books and they are so good! Wayne Thomas Batson wrote them and they are so good!thank you!
Is it stealing if I take a name from someone else’s book and use it for my own? because Ravial is off of Chuck Blacks novel Nova and Flight. But it was such a beautiful name I couldn’t resist!!😂kansas dirt cake is VER…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 3 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CYzWmClXlg_1aBN5BMwzylGrv0MZUlR2GKWl-7ndUqA/edit?usp=drivesdk
@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @nova21 @abigail-m
Next chapter is ready to be critiqued! This one needs a lot of work because I’m trying to make sure my explanations all make sense lol. Thank you in advance!!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Writing for a couple of hours. in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Yeah, I think I’m gonna go too. Probably because I…um…*cough, cough* got distracted on Canva and am now making a graphic for Genie and not actually writing. *sheepish grin* See ya later!! THANK YOU for writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33
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