Lin

(TW-  attacked/beat up)

 Chapter 9

Nathaniel

I watched in horror as the men kicked and punched her again and again. “Stop! Stop hurting her!” I cried, struggling to get away from the two men holding me to watch the horrible scene.

Again, the man’s fist slammed into her jaw, and another cry escaped her bleeding lips. She laid crumple…[Read more]

@esther-c

The members who critique and the members who get their work critiqued are one and the same! When you are a part of the group, the only requirement is to edit one teammate’s work a month, but you can post as many or as few works of your own as you like to get critiqued.

So basically you and your teammates are critiquing each other’s…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks for letting me know! I’ll get on the issue post-haste. 👍

@power @orielle21

Sorry I fell off the face of the earth,  really busy with writing later chapters of this and working with the new KP stuff launching,  and starting a new biz.

Anyway, thank you for your sweet words and encouragement, and when I get home on my computer I’ll add 3 more chapters!

Sorry for the long wait,  I’ll try to update tw…[Read more]

@esther are you doing it on a phone? It might not work the same.  But we will be working on it,  I’ll let Kathleen know asap (I’m on staff too)

Thanks for letting us know!

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you! Yep! Ah, cool! I’ve never seen The Last Airbender. I should give it a try. 😉 Um, I guess, lol. I’m not sure but it sounds like it. XD Ooh, that’s cool! I bet it was fun!

So, the powers are hereditary. And because there is a lot of prejudice and hate between each country, families have stayed in the same country for…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Girl, I love that the magic in your story comes from God. That’s how I’m doing it in my story as well. 😀 It’s almost as if exploring the question, “What if God created the world to work and be like this?” Anyway, I love how you’re doing it in your story world and magic system!

@esther-c

Wow, that’s so cool that you have a…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom Cool forum topic!

Your magic system sounds so cool!!! 😀 I love that it has a chemistry base//chemistry inspiration!

For my current fantasy novel, the magic system is kind of like “powers.” I guess a better way of putting that is that the characters have magical abilities. Depending on what country they’re from determines what…[Read more]

@sarafini

Ooo, I’ll have to look into that! I love seeing different creative ways of doing writing challenges and contests.

@e-m-trepke

Nice nice. I look forward to seeing your thoughts!

Interesting question! While I don’t know too much about New York during that time period, I do know that around that time electric power was still in early development and telephones were becoming more common, but were still considered a luxury item.

I did little research about New York (Specifically New York City) in the year 1899 and here’s…[Read more]

@esther-c

Cool! Here’s some tips that have helped me with article writing:

1. Write about something that is meaningful or has personal significance to you.

2. Before writing ask yourself: “What problem am I trying to solve?” this will help guide your research and writing.

3. Brain dump every and all thoughts and ideas you have on the subject…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thank for letting me know about this! The guy that created that post was indeed a bot. He and his post are now off the site.

Thanks again for letting me know!