Denali Christianson

@joy-caroline

Oooh, new story!!!

Oh, yeah, this happens allllll the time. And when it happens for me, it’s pretty awful, ’cause I get bored REALLY EASILY in stories. which may or may not explain why I was insane enough to have a fight scene on PAGE SEVEN in one of my novels *sheepish grin*

Well, this is the best advice I’ve EVER heard when it…[Read more]

@joy-caroline Murder someone.

Well, or badly injure someone. Is what I do. I’m assuming, however, that your story isn’t of the suitable genre. But yeah, what Jenna said. Keep writing by looking forward to whatever’s coming. Or maybe spice things up by doing something unexpected. Or develop who you thought was gonna be a minor character. Whatever…[Read more]

@nanisnook

Ooof, sorry it took me forever to get here. I’ve just not had the time to be very active on KP liked I’d wish. :,(

Anyway, the biggest thing is seriously DON’T COMPARE. I always get soooo down on me and my writing whenever I start comparing my sloppy, first draft to my favorite novels ever. But then I have to remember that you know…[Read more]

@milena Hi there! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I hope you have an awesome time here! I’m Linyang, one of the members here!

Ah, I used to write a ton of poetry! I’m looking forward to seeing whatever you share!

Short stories are fun! And I totally relate to finding inspiration everywhere. What are some of your favorite movies/books/songs?

@nanisnook Ah, sorry to hear you’re feeling like this! I guess here are my tips:

• Read terrible writing
• Daydream about your writing dreams
• Receive validation
• Start something new
• Take a break

Hope these help!

@kathleenramm Mm, I’ve always loved dragons. But after much consideration I’ve realised that a dragon would burn my papers to a crisp. Which is why I’m going for an eastern dragon. They can’t breathe fire (most, at least), they’re super duper cool, they can fly and take me places, they can fly up to the celestial heavens and talk with the…[Read more]

Oh, I forgot to post yesterday. Well, since I can’t remember what I ended on, paper or PC, here’s one from my PC:

“As if people actually like him, man. His life probably sucks.”

Thank y’all for the help!

@jodi-maile ooh the faulty eyewitness and stuff is great!! Ahhhh I’m feeling a little bit inspired lol!!

Thank y’all so much! This does help and encourage me!

@lydia-s No probllama! If u ever wanna just read through it, feel free! That goes for anyone!

@iluvhim18 No, the reader knows she’s innocent, it’s making others believe she did it seem realistic

@iluvhim18 Hope ya don’t mind me jumping in with my own sorta plot hole thing! I could use some tips (I’ve got an idea but some other insight would help)

So one of the big main plots in my story is one of my MCs, Jocelyn, is blamed for the murder of her uncle.

Problem is, it’s one of those where you know she is obviously innocent and I’m not sur…[Read more]

Btw I’ll put my plot hole issue on a post someone else made about their plot hole

@joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @nova21 @ribbonash @gracie-j@lydia-s @lewilliams @scripter-of-kingdoms @issawriter7 @daisy-torres@sparksaraabbott11 @abigail-m@keilah-h @mkfairygirl @iluvhim18@ariel-f @elanor @jodi-maile @beth-darlene @hallie-jean @cathrynv@elfwing

@iluvhim18 Ah, how about this. Anyone who misses is obviously welcome to read over the study, the questions and answers. And if anyone has anymore questions or wants more info just ask me!

Alright everyone, here’s the plan. We’ll probably start next week, but on Thursday. Will u be able to make it Thursday at 2 @iluvhim18

@iluvhim18 Here it is…I put slashes in between the tags to avoid excess pinging people, so remove them when you do post it again.

“Alright, y’all, I’m not exactly sure how this will work but let’s go for it anyway! How many of you have seen (or joined/posted) on the I DARE YOU TO… topic? *pauses to watch hands shoot up* I thought so… Anyway, @…

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@iluvhim18 Looks like the forum ate your topic…I still have what you wrote though, do you want me to copy/paste it over?