@daisy-torres
Active 1 year, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Mary G started the topic 1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 6 months ago
Hi all,
I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the first chapter of The Inventor’s Daughter! This is my first time asking for a critique so it’s pretty exciting! Let me know and I can share it by email. I would like it to be read before Friday afternoon if not that’s ok!
God bless!
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic The Art of Deception–Sci-fi critique in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Yay! And of course! I’ve really enjoyed your writing before so I’m looking forward to reading your latest work! 🙂
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic The Art of Deception–Sci-fi critique in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Oh cool! I’d love to read it–count me in! Should I just send you an email, then?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Mine is a poem, so there isn’t a blurb but it’s pretty much about a Young woman who allows words (her magic mirror) to speak into her life for too long, turning her into the evil queen. It’s a warning for silencing voices that are toxic in your life and knowing what is truly important.
themes would probably be dark colors and some…[Read more]
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Katherine replied to the topic Some of my art 🙂 in the forum Art 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Aw, thank you!!!!!<333 Doing the hair was probably my favorite part! Aah, thank you so much!!!!!🙂 I was hoping it would.
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Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Awesome!!! Thank you so much!!!!! 🙂 Of course! [ @scripter-of-kingdom @faith-q @godlyfantasy12 ] Some of the authors aren’t on KP, but their stories include spy/sci-fi, sci-fi in general, fantasy, crime, and realistic. This link: https://allieandersen.com/published-works/ has the summary for “Shape-Shifter’s Code,” if that helps.
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Katherine posted a new activity comment 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres I just now saw this, but I will DEFINITELY pray for your aunt!!!🙏 I hope everything is alright!<3
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Madelyn started the topic A Rather Belated Introduction in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 6 months ago
Hello!!
I joined the Kingdom Pen forum back in December and made a few appearances, but I only just now got around to introducing myself!
Writing has been a passion of mine for a long time, but Kingdom Pen was really the place that encouraged me to get serious about it. About 4 years ago, I began reading the articles, stories, and poetry― as w…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic The Art of Deception–Sci-fi critique in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
OOooOooo, this sounds exiting! I’m not sure if I’ll be a able to commit if it’s too long tho, could you give me an estimate of the word count?
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic The Art of Deception–Sci-fi critique in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Ooh, I’m definitely interested, though I may or may not have the time to fully dive into it and give you solid feedback. How soon do you need the critique back?
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ella replied to the topic The Art of Deception–Sci-fi critique in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
I’d LOVE to!! The title is amazing, (plus I actually have time XD) and the book trailer made me very curious!!!!!! =)
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Kads posted an update 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Just tagged you on my blog 🙂 https://yourwriterlyfriendkads.wordpress.com/2021/08/29/never-have-i-ever-writers-edition/
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Aww!! Thank you so much!! My laptop charger stopped working yesterday so I am currently stuck with my mom’s old laptop, but I’ll try to get on that asap!
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Aw, sorry to hear that! >:P I’m looking forward to your responses!! :DDD
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Thank you!! Hopefully I’ll be up-and-running soon XD
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XD yeah. it’s always frustrating when computers decide to behave all wonky XDDD
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It seriously is X( Or apps! Recently, Google updated my laptop, and none of my writing apps are letting me write right. Hopefully that’ll straighten out too. Apparently quite a few people are having the same issues sadly…
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Yo, that’s so dumb XDD (haha write right) I hope it will. Modern technology is not, in fact, always reliable. Hence the fact that I write on a Thinkpad 2003 laptop. 😂
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Lin replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres I don’t have a blurb for it, sadly…
https://www.teenwritersnook.com/2021/08/24/its-time-to-imagine-cover-reveal-for-imagine-anthology/
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Lin replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Mine is a story called Visionaries, and the most I can say is that it’s about an insane boy and a dying girl off to create a new world. For colors I feel like that the aesthetic that @issawriter7 made me matches pretty well, which you can see on their awesome blog, but without referencing it I would say, sunset/twilight colors, gray,…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Some of my art 🙂 in the forum Art 4 years, 6 months ago
Not often, no, but I’ll occasionally have an artistic impulse and draw something. This is a sketch of my favorite character from my fantasy series. 🙂
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Kads replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
We need to keep this thread alive, guys!! What’s going on?? XDD
How are y’all doing? What’s been going on in your writing and non-writing lives? Fill me in! I’ve not been doing much, I’ve started writing my second book in my present day trilogy (some of you already know :P) Outside of my writing life, I recently had an anaphylactic attack, which…[Read more]
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Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h Awesome!! Wow, I didn’t know you had books on Amazon!! That’s so COOL!!!!!!! 😀 Did you illustrate the books too?
@jenwriter17 THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!
@daisy-torres Thank you! That’s totally okay! 🙂 Ooh, a book trailer would be incredible!!!! If you’re able to make one that would be great!!!!
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Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@morgan @precious-y @sparksaraabbott11 @elfwing @kathleenramm @maryg3 @e-k-seaver @writerlexi1216 @lydia-s @nanisnook @lewilliams @relia @hallie-jean @anatra23 @iluvhim18 @jenwriter17 @keilah-h @nova21 @ariel-f @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @beth-darlene @buildsbygideon @daisy-torres @jodi-malie @when-i-see-the-kingdom @akbaer @zatara @elanor @see…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Some of my art 🙂 in the forum Art 4 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres that is a really cool idea!
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Some of my art 🙂 in the forum Art 4 years, 6 months ago
Your art is amazing!!! Seriously, I love the purple person…
Those are so gorgeous!
lol I really love the raptor in the boot… XD
Wow… Just… Wow…
That’s so awesome!!!! I love the font you used to write the girl’s name. 🙂
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Thank you so much!!! She’s actually doing a LOT better, so thank y’all sooo much for y’all’s prayers!!!
I’m soo glad to hear she’s doing much better!!!!
Anytime you need me to pray for something or someone, I’m always here!! <333
Aww, thank you so much!! You’re too sweet! I’ll take you up on that some day XD And same goes for me! Any time you need a prayer buddy just let me know!
Thank you so much for being my prayer buddy!!!<333
Could you pray for my uncle? He's in the hospital and has covid and pneumonia.
I’m soooo sorry I didn’t see your message!!! I will DEFINITELY pray with you!! How is he doing?? @mkfairygirl
@daisy-torres It’s alright. 🙂 Thank you!! He’s out of the hospital now but is still experiencing symptoms and having trouble breathing.
@mkfairygirl I’m glad to hear he’s out of the hospital!! My grandma just got it recently and was experiencing a lot of aching in her joints. If he has that, he may wanna try keeping himself warm, as that stops inflammation *cough* or so @elfwing says XD But it definitely helped my grandma with that. Also the doctor told my grandma to keep moving…[Read more]
@mkfairygirl aw I’m sorry, that’s kind of scary 🙁
I do have some tips, I was sick for over 6 weeks with long covid and almost hospitalized, and although I didn’t have pneumonia, my lungs were pretty bad.
I’m still struggling with tiredness and achiness and loss of taste and smell a year later. If I’m around people for two hours and it exhausts…[Read more]
@elfwing Awww girll you still don’t have your taste and smell back? Poor thing!! I read several articles online where people were able to get it back by stimulating those areas of their brains! Try picking up random objects and focusing on the way they smell. My grandma lost her taste and smell too, but she can taste salty and sweet things. Maybe…[Read more]
@daisy-torres My mom has tried the essential oil trick but all it did was clear my sinuses haha. What happens when people lose their sense of smell and taste to covid, is that the inflammation sometimes causes damages the nerve endings, affecting smell and taste. I was sick for almost two months, so I guess it did *shrugs
I have tried…[Read more]
@elfwing My mom was saying she saw a tiktok video where people were roasting a whole orange on an open fire, and once it had grill marks on it they sliced it open and added brown sugar inside and ate it. Supposedly the combination of sweet and sour, plus the scent of the grilling, is enough to stimulate the area of the brain that can’t smell/taste…[Read more]