Daisy Torres

@daisy-torres I’ve left some comments! Thank you so much for sharing!

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That was really good and super suspenseful!!!  I love Tessa’s personality and internal monologue, too, lol!!  You HAVE to post more—please!!!!!! 😃

@daisy-torres Cool I’ll try to get to this today!

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Ooo, I LOVE this!!! ❤  It was funny in the beginning and really intense at the end, which I love!  And I like Tessa’s character, and of course, the antique roadshow guy.  Overall, it was really well written and I can’t wait to read the next chapter!! (which might be awhile because I’m pretty busy today, so….)  Thanks for sha…[Read more]

@daisy-torres Ah usually they’re from songs that I’m currently listening to, but the signature doesn’t allow me enough space to credit it. The one I currently have is from a song called “So ist es immer” by Hiroyuki Sawano! I really encourage you to check it out; it’s a beautiful song!

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I just finished reading the prologue. I actually don’t have any critiques for it; it was amazing:D

@daisy-torres Left some comments! Awesome job!

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OH MY WORD, Daisy!!!!!! Thank you for this!!!!!! I’m so happy I HAVE FAN ART!! Woohoo!!!! I really like it, and you totally got her dress perfect!! Thank you!! 🙂

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OH MY WORD, girl that means soooo much to me!!! Thank you!!! 🙂 And I’ll totally have you read for me in the future!! I’m super happy that you like it, because I was super nervous posting it and wasn’t sure if it was any good! Aww, I’m sure it wasn’t bad! Some of my earlier writing was verrry cringeworthy XD But thank you!!!! E…[Read more]

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Heyo!!!  Ooo YAY!!!  I love the title…

Oh. my. gosh.  I ADORE this simile sooo much!!!

Aaahh, my eyes are watering already!! 😢

You did it again–girl, you got skills!! 😃

*cue jaw drop*

Maybe instead of “this child” again, you could write “Bridgett”?  there was a little repetitiveness.  So sad!…[Read more]

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Of course, girl!!! Anytime!!! 🙂 *high-fives*

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THANK YOU, Daisy!!!!! <3333333 Seriously, girl, your feedback was AMAZING!! I’m super glad you were hooked!!! 😀 I look forward to what you think of Pt. 2!!!

@daisy-torres AHH that was so good and sad and beautiful! I love your descriptions!

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Thanks, Daisy!! I’ll be happy for you to read it!! And no problem 😉 Ahaha, it’d probably be wise to start with this one. Can’t wait to hear your thoughts/feedback!!

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GIRL, this is amazing!! It made me cry!! It was so sweet and sad (I say that in a heartfelt way) and had some lovely descriptions!! Those first two lines? Already got me hooked. Also, I adore the name Bridgett. *applauds* Well done! 🙂

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Hey everyone!!  I just want to thank you all for your tips/input/reading/offering-to-read/etc. and I want you to know how much I appreciate…[Read more]

By the by, if some others wanted to read it, I’d really appreciate the feedback! I may tag a few more people (because every smidget of feedback is helpful for a first-time writer!) 🙂 Obviously you’d have to go back to the first post of my first chapter…

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@daisy-torres Haha, ikr!!! Its  face is just so weird and creepy…

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I love these poems!