@daisy-torres
Active 1 month, 1 week ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres And done! I loved it, per usual.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres I’ll try to get to this today!
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
……… I think this was the best chapter so far…….. SOOO goooood, but really sad!! And I adore the description and suspense. You also used all 5 senses, which brought the chapter to a whole other level. The mystery, intrigue, beauty… I’m sooo ready for the next chapter!! 💛💛💛 (is that going to be the last one? that’…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Girl, that was great!! Super fun to read, as always! 😉
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
OOO, YAY!! let me read it real quick and I’ll give you some feedback…
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Aight I left some comments! Thanks for sharing!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Cool I’ll try to get to it soon!
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I love this soooo much!! Tessa and the other characters, the internal monologue, the mirrors, the music, the prophecy… the whole concept is sooo cool!!! TYSM for sharing!!!!!!!!!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Ey I just read through it and left a couple comments! Thanks for sharing!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Aw, that was beautiful!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 3 years, 9 months ago
I love that poem:) It’s so beautiful!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
This sounds awesome! (I’m a slow reader however XD ). I’ll let you know when I finish though:)
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres of course! Anytime!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres I’ve left some comments! Thank you so much for sharing!
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
That was really good and super suspenseful!!! I love Tessa’s personality and internal monologue, too, lol!! You HAVE to post more—please!!!!!! 😃
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Cool I’ll try to get to this today!
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Ooo, I LOVE this!!! ❤ It was funny in the beginning and really intense at the end, which I love! And I like Tessa’s character, and of course, the antique roadshow guy. Overall, it was really well written and I can’t wait to read the next chapter!! (which might be awhile because I’m pretty busy today, so….) Thanks for sha…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Ah usually they’re from songs that I’m currently listening to, but the signature doesn’t allow me enough space to credit it. The one I currently have is from a song called “So ist es immer” by Hiroyuki Sawano! I really encourage you to check it out; it’s a beautiful song!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I just finished reading the prologue. I actually don’t have any critiques for it; it was amazing:D
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres Left some comments! Awesome job!
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