@daisy-torres
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Kads posted a new activity comment 4 years, 7 months ago
@daisy-torres LOL thank you. 😉
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Kads posted a new activity comment 4 years, 7 months ago
@daisy-torres Awesome, thank you, I’ll read it once I get the time!!!! <33333
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 7 months ago
Hahaha! I already love Felicity! 😉
He totally sounds like you described him. If I had to go on an adventure now, I’d want him to be the leader! 😉
Can I hang out with Catherine for a day, please? Just a day? XD
Hahaha! Poor Horace. *cough* dumb teenagers *cough* 🙂
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ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 7 months ago
Hey Kayleigh!! Of course! That’s a great idea, I definitely get wanting that feeling of satisfaction. 🙂
Hey Elfwing! Thanks!! Oh I totally get that!! That’s an awesome idea, thanks for the advice!
Hey Daisy! Aw, thanks!! That’s super helpful, especially the part about realizing that he can love <…[Read more]
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ella started the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 7 months ago
The title says it all, folks. I just thought it might be fun to compare what your character says to see if the dialogue truly matches their personality or not.
So I’ll share mine first!
MC is Dylan, who is stubborn, quiet, and strong-willed. A little self-protective. Lmk if his dialogue fits his personality.
1) “Better.” (*rolls eyes…
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Alexa Autorski started the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
*rubs hands together* Yup, I’m sure there’s been a topic about this already, but I’m starting a new one because I
am totallyÂtoo lazy to search wanted to ask… how do y’all get over writer’s burnout? *dun dun dun* So after finishing my novel, Last of Her Kind, the author side of me has been feeling super bummed about what I write and I’ve just be…[Read more] -
Lin replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 7 months ago
@kathleenramm It was helpful that in the canon they also appear together.
@daisy-torres Chaos is a good word for it XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 7 months ago
@daisy-torres honestly ur thing about ppl turning to vegetables reminds me of the rocky and bullwinkle movie
😂
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Elfwing replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 7 months ago
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Kathleen replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 7 months ago
That story is actually amazing. The creativity is unmatched.
Who else write a story where the population is turning into vegetables?
Now I’m curious about how all these characters fit together in one story.
Also, chocolate covered raisins are underrated.
I actually laughed out loud reading…[Read more]
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ella started the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 7 months ago
Hey guys! Before I tell you my problemo, I’ll fill you in on the story first. Here’s They Came At Night’s synopsis:
24 miles off the Island of Camino, a commercial airline goes down in the Pacific. Only one passenger survives.
Dylan, an orphan-turned-foster child, was living with his uncle when he got the chance of a lifetime: travel to the i… -
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing A Christian Fantasy-HELP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
thank y’all so much!!!
So this is what I’ve got.
Arabella
- She is to help save those who will defeat Eder.
- She has to change her mindset
- She must learn to let go and trust God, (The One) to forgive herself of a past mistake and know that God has created her for this purpose and she can do it.
November
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Elfwing replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 7 months ago
@kathleenramm yours sounds great! the glassblower is a very cool idea and I’d totally give it a good grade if I was a teacher. Either way it sounds great!! The glassblower idea is amazing (sorry repeated myself lol)
@godlyfantasy12 I admit I laughed out loud but that is a hilarious and great idea XD maybe the older sibling could have bribed them…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I'M MAKING A WEBSITE!!! YAY! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @ilena-louise, @daisy-torres, @jodi-maile, @lucy, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @seekjustice, @lewilliams, @e-k-seaver, @kathleenramm, @g_c_al, @millennium, @wyn-rose, @kayleigh-idea, @not-so-secre…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Writing A Christian Fantasy-HELP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
I agree with @gracie-j @devastate-lasting and @daisy-torres
As Lin said, I wouldn’t show my writing to most people at my church or people in general that are not my peers because my books are not for kids and the majority of adults would wonder what on earth I’ve been reading and watching to come up with such stuff. not that’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Writing A Christian Fantasy-HELP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @ilena-louise, @daisy-torres, @jodi-maile, @lucy, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @seekjustice, @lewilliams, @e-k-seaver, @kathleenramm, @g_c_al, @millennium, @wyn-rose, @kayleigh-idea, @not-so-secre…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I'M MAKING A WEBSITE!!! YAY! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @ilena-louise, @daisy-torres, @jodi-maile, @lucy, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @seekjustice, @lewilliams, @e-k-seaver, @kathleenramm, @g_c_al, @millennium, @wyn-rose, @kayleigh-idea, @not-so-secre…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic non-typical critters for stories in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 7 months ago
Yah! that would be great! I have an Asian style culture in the southern region of Visaya (my lands in my story)… but it’s not a major plot and the elephants are only just making their entrance in the story lol They’re more the African species for looks, but small; like just big enough for someone to ride, small. XD (sorry…[Read more]
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Precious Y replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 7 months ago
Hi @daisy-torres,
I got through the first two chapters of your book with my tokens and I thought it was great. The prologue was interesting and mysterious and I had a great time getting to know Ulysses. He seems really likeable and I sympathize with his story. Could you give me a brief summary please. What country are they supposed to be in?…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic non-typical critters for stories in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 7 months ago
Okay lol
phew I’m glad I didn’t. I know I can sometimes
hehe I make Roadrunner trails
I like the elephant version
OHHH elephants!! Those don’t usually show up in fantasy
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