Kareena Liess

@xonos-darkgrate as someone who has read and reread this story, I can assure you it’s anything but simple. In many ways it’s a lot like most classical literature— the premise it’s built on is very basic, almost simple, and yet when you read the story it’s nothing you ever would have guessed.

@Daeus *sniffs* You forgot to tag me.
But looks like I’m first to the party anyway, so here goes. XD

First off, I really like it. The only suggestions I have are a few tweaks to the wording.

The first line, I think, would be better as simply ‘Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister are now…’ etc. It leaves out…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 will continue. 😉

@raevynstar *nods* Totally valid reason. 😉

@Rolena-Hatfield that’s awesome! I like the color scheme. 😀

@raevynstar heyyyyyy! I’m an INFP too. 😀 Welcome to KP; so glad to have you here. I’m a poet (of sorts 😛 ) as well. Why do you like poetry?

@Daeus don’t hesitate to poke me if I forget— I’ve got about a million things swirling around in my head lately. 😛

@Emma-Flournoy ‘kay. 🙂

@Daeus I’ll also review it when it comes out.

@xonos-darkgrate I really, really like the excerpt you posted. The voice is very strong. The one criticism I have is that the summary of his early life never really clearly transitioned into the present. He was looking back, and I never quite caught where he stopped and began living the current story.
And I’m already curious about Brandon. 😉

@xonos-darkgrate awesome! INTJs and INTPs both are so cool. 😀 I’m an INFP myself.

@xonos-darkgrate same. XD

… you wouldn’t happen to know your MBTI type, would you?

Hello yourself, @kballen. 😀 Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
That’s a great mindset to have, and let me tell you you’ve come to the right place. 😉 KP has been my whole support, basically, ever since I started seriously writing. It’s awesome. Good choice. *thumbs up*

What do you most like to write? Do you have a favorite genre?…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate well, I’m late to the party… but… hi! 😀 Welcome to KP. No fear— your ‘ranking’ will go up the more you post. 😉 It’s basically just a gauge to keep track of how long someone’s been on the forum.

One other thing I will say about this lovely place is that we all love discussions, especially over controversial issues like……[Read more]

@Daeus sure. What’s one more kingdom? *dons crown*

@Daeus distractions are a part of life. Deal with them. Nine times out of ten, life is more about discipline.
XD

@perfectfifths good to know. 😉

@Daeus *innocent whistling*

Lemme tag some other people here. @Daeus @Dragon-Snapper @DelightinLife @SleepwalkingMK

@Joy-Schmidt ohhhh! Well then, you just answered your own question! XD
That’s very possible though.
In which case, I’m afraid it’s probably just a discipline problem. Maybe you should ask yourself why you write— what it is about writing that makes you want to do it. I’ve read your work and I see a lot of potential, but if you write merely for…[Read more]