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raevynstar replied to the topic Is My Main Character Well-Developed? in the forum Characters 6 years, 6 months ago
Bumping/resurfacing this thread to ask one more question.
Will it bother readers if the male MC (the one this thread is about, lol) is smaller and weaker than the female MC? It makes sense—the girl (named Iris) grew up as a warrior/soldier, so she’d have to be strong…
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
March To The Sea! Or Kitchen Sink.
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
I enjoy reading and cooking.
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raevynstar replied to the topic Looking For Critique Of Realistic Middle-Grade Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 6 months ago
Yes, that’s fine. 🙂
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raevynstar started the topic Unlikable 12-Year-Old MC in the forum Characters 6 years, 6 months ago
In my secondary project, which is realistic/Christian fiction, the main character, Fiona, is…unlikable at first. To say the least. She’s not evil, but she’s petty, spoiled, and judgemental.
This book is a retelling of The Secret Garden, so you know she’s going to be redeemed. 😉 But how do I keep readers invested in such a whiny brat’s point of…[Read more] -
raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
Yes. 🙂
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raevynstar replied to the topic Looking For Critique Of Realistic Middle-Grade Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 6 months ago
2828 words so far.
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raevynstar replied to the topic Looking For Critique Of Realistic Middle-Grade Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 6 months ago
That’s okay! 🙂
@shannon, I’ll have to figure out how to PM you. Is a google doc okay? -
raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
@daughteroftheking, I’m not entirely sure. lol. I guess I just stumbled across this group by chance.
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
@emma-flournoy, North Central Pennsylvania.
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong, occasionally. I prefer writing about other fantasy creatures, though.
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea, I don’t have a proper description yet. *I* know what it’s about, but it’s hard to describe, lol.
@kate-flournoy, it allows me to express my emotions in a relatively-easy (for me) manner. 😀
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
Both, leaning slightly more towards cats.
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raevynstar replied to the topic Is My Main Character Well-Developed? in the forum Characters 6 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! 😀
Everything that you two said is very helpful. As for the question about a Labrador…most animals are extinct in this book, lol.Now I wish I could continue writing this book, instead of my school-assigned realistic fiction project. 🙁 Soon…
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
The US.
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
Lois Lowry! 😀
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raevynstar replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper, it’s a dystopian/post-apocalyptic novel. 🙂
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