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Snapper replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 *falls over*
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Snapper replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 *runs away from life* AAAAHHH!!!! *slams door on the blizzards face* Sorry I’m late. But I’m here now.
My response is:
“She was going to write a Snow White retelling, and needed all the white books for research.”
*nods* I’m a genius. 😛
And I tag @supermonkey42 to write a one sentence story based on this picture:
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ethryndal Now, now, dear, trying to act all cool will only end with you embarrassing yourself all the more…
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Snapper replied to the topic I need help with… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@reaganramm This article:
Don’t Talk About Your Book Until It’s Published
(I think you guys are right. LOL 😛 )
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Wait, I’m mean to you? Which one of us is a J, ma’am? At least I’m not heartless.
*ahem* But seriously, thanks. You’re cool, I guess. @ethryndal
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Elizabeth replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
*also backs out* What…even happened.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Friend's editing website! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@gh24682468999 As Audrey mentioned, I am a freelance editor. Getting started is a matter of (as Audrey also said) critiquing and editing friends’ and other writers’ manuscripts for free. If someone wants a beta or alpha reader–put your hand up! You’ll get practice and experience and also you’ll get your name out there as an editor.
Other than…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Baby's First Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@Jenwriter17 oh my wooooord that’s so cute. XD I love it.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 years, 8 months ago
@Jenwriter17 I was away for the weekend but I still read the first 2 chapters of Esther and all. 😀 I noticed that too! Esther was beautifully submissive.
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Gracie replied to the topic *waves manically* ;P in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Zikers, I am so bad at replying in a timely manner anymore. 😅
I liked Into the Dalek too! It’s not my favorite, but it was fascinating. My favorite would probably have to be….ack. I dunno if I can choose! I liked Smile, the one with the emoji-bot-thingys. XD I also LOVED The Caretaker where he goes undercover at Clara’s school. 😂😂 His…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Just an irritating plot bunny-type story that won’t leave my head. *shrugs* *pets said bunny*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Aww, it hasn’t been that long, has it?
@rochellaine Hi! I saw it! Thanks! *grins*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Hello, peoples! I’m here. Working on a thing. @dekreel @rochellaine @who-else-is-on-anyway
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Snapper replied to the topic What's Your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel @daughteroftheking @ariella-newheart @emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @ethryndal
And here’s a flashback to one of the first gif war that lasted 3 pages.
https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/taking-breaks-from-unfinished-books/page/2/ between me, Kate and Ethryndal. *nods*Kate, why is it that you and I always have to get stuck in gif wars? 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Choppy Writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@Dragon-snapper yeah. They said it. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Well, I was going by the military version. Gamma an Epsilon… I think those are Greek? Or some other version.
I don’t know. That’s just what I’m calling them.
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Snapper replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Alpha – 1st readers of unedited work.
Beta – 2nd readers of 1st edits
Charlie – 3rd readers of 2nd edits.
Delta – 4th readers of 3rd edits.
Echo – 5th readers of 4th edits.
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Snapper replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 8 months ago
@warrenluther04 Lol. *pats shoulder* There there. You’re only ah… two months late.
LOL Yes you can read it. BUT, you’ll probably have to wait a bit until I’m done with this round of edits. Then, I’ll ask for another round of beta-readers (charlie-readers). But I will need that kind of people, so I’ll be sure to tag you if you’re available…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Choppy Writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
So recently (okay, not recently). For the past TWO novels, I’ve been really focusing on the show don’t tell thing. That in itself is all right. I don’t know how to do otherwise now. However, it creates another sort of problem.
Choppiness.
Due to the fact that I’m not exactly writing a school essay and transitions such as ‘furthermore’ won’t…[Read more]
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