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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae @vinagirl @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @acancello @hybridlore @anyone-else
Okay, guys. I need serious help. My novel is kind of going nowhere…because I don’t know which way to start it!!!
I have two beginnings for my story. One jumps straight into…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I really like this scene!!!
Some ideas for plot twists:
Maybe she apologizes to Albert or something?? And then realizes that she does like him? Or something happens with her and Chester? OR A NEW BOY MOVES TO TOWN!!
Sorry, all my ideas seem to be centered around romance….lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Livia
She stood there for a moment. “Um…I’m not sure how to do this.”
“Yeah, me neither,” Lukas laughed a little, “I was kind of hoping you would know.”
“Well, I don’t.”
“Oh.”
“We should watch the other people, and maybe we’ll figure it out?” Liv raised an eyebrow, and Lukas nodded.
They studied Fynn and Callista for a good…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Hey, my little sister’s name is Hallie!! XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sef
She flinched back at the man’s voice.
It reminded her of too much….
No. She would not think about Iver now….
Cowering back into the shadows, she hoped he wouldn’t notice her. Or ask her any questions.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @esther-c
Thanks guys, it really helps me to know that I can talk to you guys <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
Sorry, I keep misspelling it….XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
If you want, I could add Sef if calyhuge’s character doesn’t fit him. Sef knows pain, she’s been abused and would probably relate to him. she too has skeletons in the closet that she doesn’t like to talk about…so yeah….
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
Guys I just finished the Atonement Child by Francine Rivers and it destroyed me emotionally…
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Ohhh, I’ve heard of her and heard she’s really good. Maybe I’ll have to pick up one of her books… 👀
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@esther-c
You should! but whatever you do, do NOT read Redeeming Love. I read some reviews and it’s really not a good book and talks about really not-so good things. At least for our age group-
Ah ok. Thanks for letting me know. (:
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I’ve never read it…but my mom told me to trust her and just not read it…so yeah.-
Oh yeah. Mother knows best. 😉
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
@traiblazer
WYOH!!! IT’S ALL YOUR FAULT!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Someone needs too keep an eye on those two…*looks suspiciously at Rae and Jonas*…things get crazy when they’re left unsupervised!!!
I read every page since page 11 because I had to know what the heck you guys were talking about lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
@trailblazer misspelled your tag XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
@traiblazer
I know exactly what it feels like to be a third wheel!!!
I completely relate to this XD
Thanks for everything <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Livia
An instructor came to the front of the room, and Liv nudged Lukas with her arm. “Oh gosh. It’s starting. I’m literally gonna die.”
Everyone else okay with dance lessons starting??
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I feel like Sef could relate to Chase. Though she’s Lilitu’s girl, since KP is technically an alternate universe for our charries, we could have them “fall in love”, at least for this RP.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay yes, it did happen, but then it unhappened, so it doesn’t count!
🤣🤣🤣 I love that logic 🤣🤣🤣
I’m like a freight train that starts out slow, gains momentum and becomes unstoppable! Mwa ha ha ha ha!
OH MY GOSH THAT’S TERRIFYING!!! JUST LIKE FRACTURE!!!! OH MY GOSH GUYS JONAS IS A FREIGHT TRAIN AND WE’RE ALL GONNA DIE…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
OH MY GOSH. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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