@beth-torres
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
So ummm…. There’s a reason they reject you… it’s because your writing’s not good enough (for the most part). So yeahhh… And if you’re going to be a good writer, you have to learn how to deal with rejection. If you can’t, then… I’m sorry. XD Anyway, that’s just what I was thinking during the whole video and I wanted to rant about i…
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 Hey! I’m really interested in Abbie Emmons after seeing you guys mention her. I’m going to check out her channel, and maybe her book 100 days of sunlight. Have either of you read it?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
I don’t know too much about that time frame, and I haven’t read any books in it that I can think of right now. Also, I have pretty much zero experience writing from male POVs, so I wouldn’t be much help there either, lol. But it does sound like a cool idea, and I would love to read it once you start it!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
@trillianwingfeather
Hi, nice to meet you! I’m hybridlore or Hybrid, a Christian homeschooler, high school sophomore, and science fiction writer. I also love the Wingfeather Saga, and I’m rereading it right now! 😁 My favorite character is probably Podo, but I like them all xD.
What do you like about your genre/style of writing and what books…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Cole…he’s in 19th Century Roleplay. This was my intro post for him:
Alright…I’m gonna call my Cole from the ashes of my life where he lies, brush him off, and shine his medals.
Cole was my hero as a young child, he did every brave deed I could think up, in a WWII setting. I don’t remember him much, since when I hit the mark of ten or so…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Hi! Nice to meet you, Trilliane! I’m Bridget, aka HighScribe, aka the resident slightly insane sword-obsessed book hoarder of KP. I’m a homeschooler, and a high school freshman. I mostly write fantasy, and I’m working on a fantasy universe with multiple planets with my brother, @Jonas.
Now the traditional quest…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, sometimes it helps to have two POVs, and other times it’s not necessary. I’ve become so accustomed to it though, that when I start coming up with a story idea, my mind naturally creates two POV characters. XD
Glad I could help!!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Fynn
“That’s really nice to hear. We know a few people whose experiences are similar to ours, like Callista and her family. Except,” his gaze drifted over to her, “she’s had a much harder time of it than me. In fact,” he tilted his head, “I’m not sure how she does it. She’s been through so much, yet when someone else is in…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Nerp, still not working…
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago

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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Are pics working for anyone else? Because I really want to post some moodboards but I can’ttt 😭

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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh wait, I just read your most recent draft and I like it even better!! I think it could stay as it is if you like it. 🙃
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I like it how it is, tbh. I think it sounds great!
I’m dreaming of a time, when I was broken,
When you comforted me, many a time.
This part though doesn’t flow as smoothly as the rest of it. Um… I wish I could offer a suggestion… Maybe it could go something like this…?
I’m dreaming of a time, when I am hurting,
And you comfort my aching h…
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Esther replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh my goodness so I just watched one of her videos on why she chose to indie publish her book, and she claimed she wasn’t bashing traditional publishing but… you can tell she’ll never traditionally publish any of her books. 🫤😂 And she was saying that some people will give their manuscript to a publishing company, get rejec…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
Oooh, I like the idea!!
That said, if anyone has any interesting plot ideas or conflict suggestions, let me know! Or if there are any good book recommendations from that time period, I’d love to hear them.
I will say writing a book over the span of eight years could be a challenge, but I’m sure you could do it. 😉 A series isn…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Anyway, you also said you don’t put Nedan in RP’s because he’s underdeveloped. I actually think the purpose of role plays is actually to develop your character. I have put many characters that aren’t developed in role plays and it helps me to hear their voice and learn more about them, just from writing them outside…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Livia
“I had people I hung out with, but they weren’t really my friends. I could never really be close with them, because we had to hide our secret from the government,” her eyes wandered for a moment to Lukas and Callie dancing across the room. She tore her eyes from Lukas and back to Fynn. “So I know how you feel.”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh wow!!! This is a really cool idea!!
I’m not really sure how you want your story to go…but I would really recommend developing your characters before any plotting! Figure out their character arcs and internal conflicts. (Abbie Emmons on YouTube really helped me learn why internal conflicts matter! But if you do watch her…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Wow. You (and your sister) are amazing at building worlds! I feel like mine is so cliche! I really can’t help you much on worldbuilding, because I’m really new to that and it would be like trying to teach a professional artist how to draw, XD
But I will gladly try to help you with characters!!!
@grcr gave some great pointers on character…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
I like it!
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Oh awesome!! She can have some really helpful stuff, but take it all with a grain of salt, because I feel like not everything she says works for every writer. (Like outlining your entire novel before writing it). But yeah, super helpful stuff. 😊
I’ve been wanting to, but haven’t gotten the chance yet. She has a sequel to that and I believe it’…[Read more]