Beth

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Okay…so this scene/chapter comes before the scene where Iver abuses Sef. (I just wrote it last night after looking at the plot and realizing I’d forgotten a major part!!!)

Anyways….

The girl opens her mouth and screams.

Her screams echo off the walls, begging for someone, anyone to hear her.

Her pain is vivid,…

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@esther-c

YES, YES, YESSSSS!

*subscribes*

@whalekeeper @esther-c

Same! I’ve been looking at it a lot recently. I think it’s really good for understanding the main drive and personality of each character, but I don’t understand all of it completely.

Have you guys taken the test? I’m a 5, but I’m not sure what wing I am.

Uh! I did an rp placing Nahim in the town but it didn’t post! Ohwell, know everyone that Nahim is slowly wondering in the streets toward the palace. If one your charries want to meet him, go ahead, if not it doesn’t matter.

@esther-c I can’t wait!!

@stephie

Also, a triple bunk bed sounds AWESOME.

@stephie

Hi, so nice to meet you! I’m Hybridlore or Hybrid, a homeschooled sophomore, violinist, and science fiction writer.

(Hey, I’m also taller than my mom! But I wasn’t when I was thirteen XD)

Favorite genre?

Favorite books besides the chronicles of Narnia?

Okay, here’s a new one. Do you have a favorite poem, and what is it?

@esther-c @freedomwriter76

They look great! Have y’all tried out Milanote? It’s a pretty cool tool for making character references and moodboards 😊

Zahlin

Zahlin pointedly ignored her. Though it probably wouldn’t help anything.

@esther-c

*materializes out of nowhere*

*hits subscribe*

*melts back into the shadows*

Zahlin

“Leave me alone. I didn’t ask for your company.” Zahlin said.

Wow. Just, wow. The sword said, Your social skills never fail to amaze me, Zahlin.

Zahlin

Zahlin glowered at her. “I don’t have time for this.” He snapped, “Get out of my way.”

Zahlin

Zahlin grunted and resumed his walk.

@stephie

I’m not sure I understand your question 🤔

Zahlin

Zahlin eyed the girl. “I… don’t know.”

Walking. That’s how we got here. Walking. We walked over here from back over there. The sword said, Remember?

Zahlin’s gloved fist tightened on the hilt of the sword. It was dangerously close to letting itself slip and speaking aloud.

Zahlin

Zahlin’s hand immediately went to his sword. He relaxed slightly after a moment, but his hand didn’t leave his sword. She appeared mostly harmless, but vigilance always paid off. The most unlikely people could turn out to be assassins.

Can I talk to her? The sword asked, She seems nice.

“No.” He said to both of them.

@rae

Zahlin twenty or so years ago likely would have been similar. He used to be an honorable fighter (and just person, in general).

I know, it’s very hard to imagine.

Realn rant, sorry

No worries. I like listening to people rant about their cool stuff.

Zahlin

Zahlin surveyed the streets around him. Nothing was familiar.

This place doesn’t look like home, Said a bright, cheery voice in his head, it’s a whole new place full of more people you can get after your blood!

“You are way too happy about this.” Zahlin said, “Actually, I take it back. You’re way too happy about everything.”

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@whalekeeper

Oh, I’ve been looking at that lately. Yeah, it’s kinda hard to understand. XD I’ve just used it for inspiration or help with forming a character’s arc. I basically just read as much as I need to know about a certain type then move on, lol. It’s really interesting tho.

And for your enjoyment… the mock cover…

(Sorry, had to cover my last name XD)