@beth-torres
Active 1 week, 2 days ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Awww 😭 It’s so sad but adorable at the same time 🥹
I LOVE those aesthetics!!!! They’re soooo goood❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much!!
And joining a new church is a big change!! I’ll pray for you and your family.
Yeah definitely, but it’s been a good one for us since this is exactly where God wants us at the moment.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks, they really are 😊
Thank you!!
Yeah, that’s fair. I use more description later on. I imagine my characters pretty vividly in my head, but I don’t always write it out. Typically I sprinkle in bits of description every now and then. Like, I think in the next chapter or so, I mention Ami has blonde hair. For the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ok, let’s do it! Is Pax just chillin’ in the school rn?
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, it is really cool! Not everyone likes to use it, but I find it really helpful in the beginning stages of developing a character.
Lukas
“W-well, I guess… I guess we’ll all just have to make the best out of the time we do have together.” He smiled softly. “And you could always visit Aletheia. It’s not in its best con…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
go ahead.
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hybridlore replied to the topic How To Write Christian Fantasy-Putting God In The Mix in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 7 months ago
I really like the way you put that!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Basically, this story started out as a fun party with your characters. And then we switched it to a really crazy/chaotic but extremely FUN Role Play…and then it died after 352 pages 🙁
Jonas made another topic for the action adventure one, but I’m keeping this one as the “Party” section. All the characters woke up after a dream…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
@proncesachronicle22
WOW! That’s amazing! Great job!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nahim
“I have no idea. I’m unfamiliar with these people, this planet. Shall we head to the palace? Find answers?”
@everyone
I should probably explain that directly post Nanian war Nahim is gonna be very sensitive to certain things, more so than in the last rp. He will also probably refuse to help the Lillenings at…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry that I haven’t explained this yet, but Nahum’s sword is a green crystal sword. At the moment, it only looks like a sword handle piece, but it can, when activated, form a green glowing blade. Again, I apologize for not specifying. He also has a gun strapped to his thigh.
Nahim
“I know no place called ‘Spires’. I am the…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m gonna apologize for not keeping up with anything but the rps rn. Having a hard time with life and trying to sort everything out.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@prinspcesachronicle22
Nahim
Nahim looked at the purple dagger, than at the woman who held it. He saw her as not much of a threat, but he still had his metal hand resting on his sword pommel.
“Warrioress, amon. ” He bowed his head. “I am Lord Nahim Nayhelm, a child of Laxor, son of Master Anoran. You do not look Native, do you have any clue of…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 yes she does, XD
Nae
Despite her innocent looks and questions about the meanings of words was a Nae that seemed too rarely to come through. She could sense Riker’s fear, sense the commanding, rude presence of his father, sense the quiet, scared nature of the girl in the corner. She stared up at…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nope, Lilitu’s not in here.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sef
She closed her eyes, tremors shaking her small form.
She took a step back.
And another.
And then her back hit the wall.
She was trapped.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I love them! They’re so sweet! <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’ve never really heard of the MBTI stuff before KP and haven’t looked much into it…but it sounds cool!
Liv
She looked at Lukas. He was so caring…so-
She felt the tears coming again.
“What’s wrong?” he asked, looking into her eyes.
“I-I-” she tried to keep her voice from breaking. “I made so many friends here…and then I’ll…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!! Me too 😊😁
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
🤣 I love that!!!
Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)
Lukas
He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
OH MY GOSH I LITERALLY SCREAMED AND HOPPED AROUND MY ROOM AND MY SIBLINGS WERE SO CONFUSED lol
Livia
“I-I’d like that,” she smiled at him, and then sighed, burying her face in her hands. “Fynn is never going to let us live this one down…”
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Aww I’m sorry! (And don’t apologize for not having time to be on KP! Life happens, XD XD) And I know how that feels…my life’s kind of crazy and confusing rn…I know it can be hard ):